RpNation

I’ll be happy to look it over for ya, how long is it?

At the moment only one chapter but chapter two will come as soon as I get it proofread. You know what they say, though. First impressions are everything. (Also, I made sure to actually have good spelling and grammar for this and the proofreading is largely to be safe rather than sorry.)

One chapter doesn’t tell me how long though, how many paragraphs, how many lines on average per paragraph

Oh, hold on a sec.

Chapter 1 has about 11 paragraphs and chapter 2 (the one being proofread) has about 15 unless I end up needing to cut a few. On average I'd say each paragraph has 4-5 lines with some having 6 or 7.