Words

[DeadlyFluffy]

Someone was bullying me one day in school and I poured all the anger and pain into a poem and here is the significantly shortened version.

Words

by: DeadlyFluffy




Words can hurt, Words will turn, Words will kill and Words will burn. The stinging pain of the sticky words is a painful memory I wish unheard.


I am not stupid. I am a person, I’m not a bug, I will not worsen.


So take my pain an turn it around, feel your heart tumble to the ground.


Now listen to what I have to say, quit letting your ego fill a chalet.


“I will be kind. You will be cruel. I will be sweet. Like you've been a damned fool. I have a worth.


which you think untrue, so decide to apologize, I’ll be waiting for you.”



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[GreenIV]

Awh, kick the bully's ass for me! *huggle*


I do think the poem captures the essence of what the victim'd love to say.

 

[DeadlyFluffy]

Awe! (I'm working on kicking ass )


Ya I get bullied frequently so I know what its like


@GreenIV

 

[Shy2Infinity]

@DeadlyFluffy Yikes, I can feel the anger o_o But I love the writing style. I've frequently been bullied at school so I know what its like ^.^"

 

[DeadlyFluffy]

Ha you should have seen the long version (Its over three pages) also Thanks!

 

[Shy2Infinity]

Ha you should have seen the long version (Its over three pages) also Thanks!

Oh my... That is indeed long o_o

 

[Grey]

On reflection, and a second read, I think you might have potential. I appreciate that you appear to go from justified anger to laudable restraint.


Impossible to say for sure, right now. I'd be curious to see the three-page version.


Nonetheless, if you ever feel like pursuing poetry more ardently - because it is wonderfully cathartic, and I know it got me through some hard years of bullying - this might be a good first step for you: https://www.rpnation.com/threads/between-the-words-a-poetry-tutorial.94456/

 

[DeadlyFluffy]

You could see the three page version in a month it needs major amounts of editing


And Thank you so much! That means alot to me.


I will definetly look through the link


@Grey