Utopia: Awaken the Ancient ((Pref female))

Alwaysarper

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Utopia the prefect society of the ages. Earth had fallen into a deep struggle over resources in the year 2160. The Utopian society escape this engagement and lunch their colony into a ship to travel many years for a search of a new home. Eventually the people of the old Utopia had found a new home a planet that look similar to earth but more alive. This Utopian society began to use the land not understanding that it was alive and that it could feel what they were doing. This society grow from the ground to couple of villages being advised by the council of elders who had strict rules and if they were broke they would be sent into the forest of the unknown or be killed to be a example. Little did they known that the ancient one lie a sleep under ground in a old tunnel leading to a temple that was covered with plants and only the pure could enter this ancient area.


In this society the children do not get to meet their parents they are taken when they are born. The boys go to one school in the many villages as the girls do the same thing. They go to school to learn the basics but by the age of 18 the elders of the council choose what their job will be. Once the job is chosen they are assigned to a special house with the title of the job on it.


Men and Women are not aloud to talk to each other. The only ones that are free to speak their minds are the elders of the council and the teachers who teach the lucky if they are assigned a greater role by the elders.


John has always been a different kind of person since he was born. He had talents that others did not understand since the elder suppressed other from learning their ability's. John is always trying to learn more from everybody around him and his teachers are not sure about him because ask to many questions. John feels like the escape goat always being blamed for the problems with the others kids. Time goes by and John is 17. He is always trying to explore this brave new world which the other dare not try because they do not want to be punished. He eventually finds this tunnel that leads to the temple were hears a voice calling him but he always stops himself from going any further into the area of the temple. He is a week away form his 18th birthday which fate will decided his job. One day in the temple area he kinds a injured animal from this world and began to heal it. He heals the animal with care and feeding it. Little does he known he will awaken the ancient one. He sets the small little animal in the temple and looks into the darkness not seeing anything. He is to chicken to go inside. He just gives a small little prayer that owner of the temple would help this little animal.


John eventually leaves and goes home to his bed. He sleeps in the room with 10 other guys waiting for his 18th birthday to happen in two days. Little does he known he has awaken the ancient one.


The story more like a romance, action and fall of utopia.


If interested just message me on the forum or pm me.


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[QUOTE="Forever For Never]Ooh, I think this sounds interesting. Could you elaborate a bit on what exactly the 'ancient one' does/is?

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Pm me and we can talk about it. :)
 

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