One x One Until Kingdom Come KozaktrixBumblebri [Closed]

[Soliloquy]

@Bumblebri, please edit this post to include any OOC information.

 

[Renny]

I also want to ask, what are the mysterious assassins exactly going to be? Will they be the main antagonists or something?


@Bumblebri

 

[Soliloquy]

Yes, I'm


Thinking they're a part of an alliance working on keeping the two kingdoms separated. Might expand on the sorcerer and make him more of a powerful necromancer. I also plan on Talyn being kidnapped prior to them reachin the Capitol.

 

[Renny]

Okay, I see no reason to change that :3

 

[Soliloquy]

@Kozaktri they don't have the horses yet, right?

 

[Renny]

Yeah, they still don't have horses. I was thinking the village would be some sort of farming thing.

 

[Renny]

@Bumblebri


I was wondering with the new map you had made, wasn't it called Ilindris, or was that just a typo?

 

[Soliloquy]

It is Ilindris, I was just sloppy with a river and drew it over the L, haha.

 

[Soliloquy]

So, I suck. I thought I had replied days ago and apparently never did. My apologies.


Do you have anything you think would make a good plot twist/element/development?


Part of me thought it could be interesting to have him chasing after her, hitting obstacles like elves, etc. But I greatly value your opinion and ideas.

 

[Renny]

That's fine, I thought you were just busy But yeah, I think we could have an encounter with an elven settlement or something like that one way or another. Maybe we could have something happen on Talyn's end too.

 

[Soliloquy]

Yeah, I was considering options. I wanted to have a bit of a trip through the different lands and the troll had seemed like a good idea at the time to get her in that direction

 

[Renny]

I think that is a good idea, having them go all over the various kingdoms.

 

[Renny]

@Bumblebri


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