Other Thorough, brutal, criticism needed

laceanddoodles

Your run of the mill Victorian lady
Hello! I am working on editing and revising a short story to be sent out to publishers, and I need help. I, obviously, cannot post it here, as posting it online will seriously hurt its chances of getting published, but if you're willing to take up the gauntlet and give it a read over, I'll send you a link to it. (Or if you just want to, like, read it.)

I have been a student of writing for quite a few years now, and I know how to take critiques. I'm looking for something a bit more meaty than "story bad >:(", but I can take the criticism, and I'd be equally displeased with just a "it's so good, wow!!" Tell me what you think is working, and what you think isn't working, and a bit into why. With some notes of that variety, then I'll really be able to get into the meat of revisions, and hopefully get this bad boy published.

Thank you all so much!
 
What's it about and how long is it (word count)?
 

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