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Fantasy The Doki to End All Doki

Basacura

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Introduction


Welcome to a big ole' Mary Sue fest! (Marty Stus are welcome, too.) Here, Mary Sues will be forced to team up and fight against a common foe: the Alliance of Dastardly Evil ~Desu, an organization of icky, sticky goblins, vampires, werewolves, robots, demons and similar such that want nothing more than to see the total annihilation of the Sue/Stu population. What haters!


The Alliance has been attacking fandoms all across the world, from Naruto to Kingdom Hearts, to carry out their malicious deeds. In order to fight them, Sues/Stus have been banding together in different factions and taking the enemies head on.


Factions


The Dark Angel Outcasts




By far the saddest of the Mary Sues/Marty Stus. Sues/Stus in this faction are almost all half-angel, half-demons with sob stories galore.


The Perfectly Royal Princess of the League of Heart




These Sues/Stus are princes and princess from their respective fandoms. Are they goody-two-shoes? You can bet ever dime in your Suntrust savings account they are! Perhaps the most flawless of Sues/Stus, this faction is littered with kind-hearted royals.


Kawaii no Kawaii Desu




Nyan! This faction contains Sues/Stus that are hyper, energetic, happy, carefree, and mostly animal crosses. Funky hair colors included.


While most Sues/Stus are cut from the same cloth, they don't all get along. As the factions fight against the common enemy, they are also fighting against themselves. Will they be able to defeat the enemy or will they be defeated by their own insatiable need to prove they are the perfect group of OCs?


Allies of Ebony




The Allies of Ebony are actually an anti-Sue/Stu faction that work alongside the Alliance of Dastardly Evil Desu. Even though they themselves are Sues/Stus, they refuse to accept it, instead claiming they are completely complex and well-rounded OCs. However, until they come to realize such, they will continue to try and destroy the Sues/Stus.


Rules and Regulations




Please reference Rules/Regulation page for more details on offenses to rules. There is a more thorough explanation to be found on that page.








  • Sues/Stus may exist in fandoms separate from the maps provided. If you have a Sue/Stus from a differing fandom, I will try and add an appropriate map later on.


    The World of Naruto


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    The world of Naruto is highly expansive. Sues and Stus are found in abundance, all carrying rich backgrounds in multiple different clans.


    The World of Sailor Moon


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    Juuban is a huge city, and home to the original sailor senshi. It's also home to one of the largest Sue/Stu populations.


    The World of My Little Pony


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    The mysterious clan known only as "le bronies" have conquered the land of Ponyville in order to form their very own pony Sues/Stus.


    The World of Sonic


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    This expansive land is home to the most ridiculous of echidna, hedgehog, and fox Sues/Stus. Most of them think they are dark and brooding, but we all know that's laughable at best.


    The World of Kingdom Hearts


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    Kingdom Hearts is like the giant melting pot of Sues/Stus. They come from all kinds of lands, can be depressingly tragic and disgustingly sweet, and can wield up to an impressive ten keyblade. At the same time. Watch out Sora.


    The World of Harry Potter


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    For whatever reason, Sues/Stus of this world tend to be in love with Draco. And making the entire main cast and crew a bunch of vampires.


    The World of Star Wars


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    With a constantly expanding world and lore, Star Wars attracts some pretty complex Sues and Stus, from Sith to Jedi.


    World of Sword Art Online


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    As an virtual reality MMORPG, the fandom allows for Sues/Stus of all kinds of crazy walks of life.





You may reference the Mary Sue: Rules to Sue By on the Role Play Overview page. They include:

  • You cannot kill other Sues/Stus*
  • Your Sue/Stu cannot be God
  • Your Sue/Stu cannot control other Sue/Stus
  • Everyone can be in love with your Sue/Stu unless it makes them uncomfortable**
  • You cannot be offensive with your Sue/Stu***
  • Keep personal drama with other players outside the RP
  • No more than one Sue/Stu per person****
  • Have fun


*If you want to kill off a Sue/Stu, you need permission of the creator of that Sue/Stu. You may do so in the Post OOC page. Likewise, if someone agrees to being killed off and then wants to come back to life, they can. They are a Mary Sue, after all. Death just adds to their tragic backstory.


**If a player makes an uncomfortable advance onto you, be sure to notify them to stop. If the behavior does not stop, notify me immediately. No one should have their experience tainted by another player.


***You cannot harass other players. Period.


****Even if you want to have one character that is a Sue and one character that is a Stu, you are only permitted one OC. Choose wiesly when creating a character.


Those are the basic rules for the RP. Please try to adhere by them. First offenders will get a warning. Multiple offenders get the boot. This is an RP of fun, giggles, and lols, not struggles and malarkey.<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2014_08/57a8c01e7cc49_TheDokitoEndAllDokiseditcopy.jpg.d7e86e403a3aa47df2ddd33b90a81fd8.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="26970" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2014_08/57a8c01e7cc49_TheDokitoEndAllDokiseditcopy.jpg.d7e86e403a3aa47df2ddd33b90a81fd8.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>

 

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Raine perched on top of a tree. The wind blew super hard, but that was cool because it made her luscious pink locks go swoosh and look really beautiful. She had her one green, one brown eyes on the target at hand. It was the same vampire baddie that had been stalking her for the past couple of hours. Thankful, being half-ram demon, she was must swifter than her adversary. She aimed her kunai at the fiend.


"Rainbow Kunai Magic!" she shouted in a soft whisper. To her enemy's suprise, he was easily thwarted by her powerful magic and even died instantly. Raine leaped from her branch with so much elegance, Mochi and Moshi couldn't help but squeal in delight.


"My friends," she whispered much embarrassed. "You embarrass me muchly." Raine blushed a deep red, which brought out her glistening eyes, the same ones that so lovingly gazed at Kakashi just a couple of days ago. However, she had no time to dwell on lost love. She had to return to the Perfectly Royal Princesses of the League of Heart headquarters to inform them of the vampire fiend.


This was the third vampire from the Alliance that had tried to thwart her just within the week alone. Maybe they are catering to vampires more these days, Raine thought brilliantly. Whatever the reason, she needed to inform her fellow faction so that they may prepare themselves for a possible vampire herd.
 
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Zuli trotted through the forest, her mane and tail trailing royally behind her in the rustling wind. Her eyes shone bright blue in the sunlight like limpid tears as she winnied and tossed back her mane. She snorted gracefully as she slid to a halt suddenly, the hairs on the back of her green-striped coat standing on end and her horn and wingtips glowing with a flicker of blue magic. She had heard a movement in the trees. Probably one of those wretched vampires, Zuli thought to herself. She looked around beautifully scanning the glade with her hawk-like vision.


Gotchya.


Zuli shot up into the air like a rocket, climbing to enormous speeds and arced downwards, spinning like a bullet towards the tree where the vampire was hiding.


"Woooaaahhhhuhh" Zuli shouted as she quickly ground to a stop midair, canceling the enormous energy behind her sonic rainboom effortlessly.


This wasn't any vampire she had ever seen. This one had pink hair... and horns!


"HALT TRESPASSER!" She commanded in The Royal Canterlot Voice.


"WHO GOES THERE?"
 
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Raine gazed with her wide, gleaming eyes bashfully at her friend from her faction. The two recognized each other and giggled gleefully at the mistake. Raine's giggle was often said to cause the birthing of a ram baby, also known as a baby lamb because rams are technically considered sheep, so the baby name for a sheep is lamb.


"To think I mistook you for a vampire," Zuli huffed.


"Indeed," spoke Raine with eloquence. "Actually, I was just on my way to headquarters to inform them of the recent exponential growth in vampire attacks." Raine felt like making a graphical chart to help explain her point better, but then got distracted thinking of Kakashi and how much she loved him. Her eyes sparkled madly in thought.


She was suddenly snapped back into reality as both her and Zuli heard rustling in the bushes. Raine heard it first, however, because she is half-elf.


"HALT TRESPASSER!" commanded Zuli. It was in her most demanding Royal Canterlot Voice. "WHO GOES THERE?"
 
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"WHO GOES THERE?"
, questioned Zuli. The rustling continued without answer. Raine looked at the super alicorn questioningly and Zuli dazzlingly returned her unknowing gaze. The super alicorn held up a hoof, intending to count from one to three as the afternoon sunlight bounced off her exquisite mane. Then she realized that she could only count to one on her hoof because she didn't have fingers. "You count." Zuli whispered gracefully to her half-elf companion, giving away their position with astounding elegance.


Suddenly a horrific creature jumped out of the bush!


"I PITY THE FOUL CREATURE WHO CHALLENGES THE PERFECTLY ROYAL PRINCESSES OF THE LEAGUE OF HEART!" Zuli huffed commandingly before blasting the vampire to bits with her alicorn magic, imploding the disgusting creature from the inside and killing it instantly. Only a beautiful talented alicorn princess such as herself could do so without spilling a drop of vampire ichor on her magnificent coat.


"Take that you disgusting peasant.", smirked Zuli. She turned to her friend. "Raine, are you injured?" She asked tentatively, turning to the ninja's adorable companions she added, "I hope your companions are unharmed as well."
 
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It was never in Kokoro's nature to be social. Most of the members of the Dark Angel Outcasts weren't. But, Kokoro was an outcast among even them, and she knew it. Kokoro was a creature of light who was dragged and branded by the dark. This was the path she was forced into. A path she knew she must walk alone.


This, however, was the one place she found peace, on top of the clocktower in Twilight Town. Her canine tooth grinded into the leftover popsicle stick from her Sea Salt ice cream as she stared into what was now a blood red sunset. Her long black hair swayed broodingly in a lonely breath of wind, her red tips curling out to the nether. She began to think of Riku, wishing he could be there with her. While in her thoughts, she lowered her eyes, allowing her hair to completely conceal her pale, porcelain face. She knew she couldn't be with him any longer, not while those monsters were after her. Kokoro had already endangered him once, she couldn't bare to do it again. As long as they were together she was putting him in danger. The monsters could attack her all they wanted--she didn't care if they killed her, but if they got Riku she would be nothing more than an empty shell. He was all she had left in her life.


A loud shriek broke her from her thoughts. Below her was a demon, readying an arrow straight for her. Kokoro quickly stood and hopped down to a lower platform above the plaza, summoning her keyblade Metalmorph as she glided down. It was a six legged beast with four arms and a human face with seven eyes and a pincher mouth. As she landed, the demon skittered back with it's ant-like legs and refocused it's aim.


"Crawl back to Hell, damn cockroach!" Kokoro shouted as she leapt off the roof of the building and threw her keyblade at the beast's carapace. Metalmorph sliced into her enemies side and a foul lime green goo erupted from it's ruptured shell. The keyblade circled back to Kokoro's hand and she walked hauntingly toward the injured half-insect, wiping it's gooey blood across her exposed check with two fingers. The creature tried to get away, but before it could Kokoro thrust her keyblade in it's chest. "You know something?" Kokoro spoke through clenched teeth, "I've been dealing with your kind all day. I know that everyone's got problems, but you," Kokoro twisted her keyblade and the creature let out an ear-piercing screech, "and your kind? You don't know me. You don't know what I've been through. So, whatever I did to piss you off," Kokoro dug her steel heel in it's open wound as she got up close and personal to it's face, "you can get over it."


With one last shove, she split the beast's heart into two. The final cry it omitted could have shattered bones. "Be glad you can feel something," Kokoro sneered as she backed away, "because your emotion is wasted."


Kokoro's hands, legs, and keyblade were all covered in slimy goo. She let out an annoyed sigh at the sight of her dirtied armor and opened a dark portal back to headquarters.
 
Raine smiled, knowing that it would take more than that to hurt her because she is half-ram. She pet her companions to see if they were all right as well. Because she touched them they instantly felt better, which was not exactly a power of hers but, instead, a testament to their friendship.


"We need to head back to headquaters," said Zuli.


"We do, but with all of the vampires we've encountered in the area, I'm inclined to scout out the rest and cleanse these lands," Raine stated with much leadership. "After all, I am princess of these lands." Raine tried not to dwell on her dark and brooding past, so she thought of Kakashi and thus her heart got happier.


"Lets purify the area, then," said Zuli, agreeing fully with Raine's brilliantly ingenious idea.


"Okay. Then we need to split up." Raine drew out a diagram of their attack plan that looked so good it was almost like it was real. Many would call such artistry a magnum opus, but this was something Raine did all the time so it was nothing special. "I'll go to the north of the woods. You can head to the south. When we're done, we'll meet back up here and then head over to HQ." Raine was a genius.


"You're a genius," proclaimed Zuli loudly. The two split up, unknowing of what was to come.
 
When Kokoro arrived to the Dark Castle it was as deserted as her purpose in life. This came as no surprise to Kokoro, of course. United wasn't the word to describe the outcasts. It was more like a group of people who acknowledge each other more than they acknowledge most other people. Kokoro strutted through the foyer, the click of her metal heels reverberating off the stone walls creating an empty echo. The halls were haunting, even to her, but, somehow, it felt fitting. Cold and empty, just like her heart.


Kokoro promptly took herself to her bathroom and bathed in dried-rose water. It took a full hour to get the disgusting goo out her her hair. After drying Kokoro put on her most comfortable blood-red corset, black mini, and fishnets. After putting on her pajamas, Kokoro sighed and fell onto her bed, ready for a good nightmare. Curling into her black silk sheets, she opened her eyes one last time to see a note addressed to her on her bedside table. She sat up and stared incredulously at the note, thinking how stupid her name looked in those fancy, twirly letters. She ripped the note from the table and angrily murmured to herself as she read the letter aloud.


Kokoro,


Upon returning I need you to take the documents on my desk to the home base of the The Perfectly Royal Princess of the League of Heart. It is of the utmost importance that these particular papers are delivered as soon as possible. Please do not waste a moment.



With spite,



The Master






Kokoro gritted her teeth and looked up into her floor length mirror across the room. Her hair neatly parted where you could see both her sparkling eyes, the red tips of her hair curled gently to the curves of her body, her cheeks still a sweet pink color, from the warmth of the bath, which glowed against the smooth pale skin of the moonlight face--needless to say, she looked awful, as always. Kokoro quickly brushed her hair back over her right purple eye and put on a leather jacket over her pajama-corset. Irritated, she left for the lands of preps.
 
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World of Star Wars added

Now enjoy Sues and Stus from the wonderful world of Star Wars. Jar Jar clones are welcome.
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Raine sashayed away with the elegance of a mirthful kitty cat. She was half-ram demon, after all. She scouted the north of the woods, an area she knew all too well. (Aside: it was the same area that her and Kakashi-sama kissed and knew immediately they loved each other.) She set up a couple of magic traps to catch some wandering vampires if they came brooding by. Needless to say it would probably kill them posthaste because vampires are allergic to rainbows. (Another aside: in the world of Naruto, vampires are allergic to rainbows. FYI.)


Raine then decided to settle down on a branch on her favorite tree. While passing the time till some vicious vampires arrived, Raine took out her iPod and listened to her favorite song, Rolling in the Deep by Adel-chan. Birds quickly fluttered by as Raine sung the song with great allure. A peacefully frolicking doe even stopped by. It was almost like it was a Disney film or whatever.


The moment was completely ruined when an icky vampire popped out of no where.


"No way!" cried Raine, who felt completely shattered by the fact her solo was completely ruined. "How dare you!" Raine pulled out the kunai Kakashi gave her for her birthday and effortlessly tossed it at the creepazoid.


The vampire turned into tiny little bats just before her kunai hit him. "OMG!" Raine was shocked by the vampire's actions. No one had ever dodged her kunai rage before. Not even Kakashi. No one has ever dodged my kunai rage before, thought Raine. Not even Kakashi. It was at that point Raine knew this fight wasn't going to be an easy one.


The vampire reassembled itself as Raine glided off her perch. Rainbow magic filled the air as Raine charged her Super Rainbow Smiley Magic attack. The vampire didn't even flinch, not even one time. As Raine completed her charge, another vampire ran in head-first, throwing her off guard.


Knocked back, Raine rolled on the ground, getting a scrape on her knee. It was a mild discomfort, like when her family and village was destroyed when she was really young. "H-how did I not sense your presence?" Raine questioned inquisitively. "OMG, but seriously, how?" Raine was now cornered by not two, but ten vampires. Things looked like they were about to get bloody.
 
Seated in his throne, Darth Master Zaminn gazed into the unending void as if a dramatic and flashy battle was about to take place. Machinery hummed and lights flickered on the nearby console. A sharply dressed Sith officer danced across the court before sharply snapped to attention. Confidently he pronounced, " Darth Zaminn we have an incoming transmission.” Still gazing in to the void, he spoke, “thank-you, you can go Admiral Tremarkt.” The officer obeyed diligently as a hologram flickered to life. A female hooded figure appeared, the light gleamed off of Darth Zaminn’s armor, and she began to speak with a voice that was obviously auto tuned, “everything is going according to plan, and your assistance and resources have been ample to begin the first stage. We must ask for further assistance as there appears to be enemy forces massing and our current forces are too involved to resolve the issue.”


There was a long pause be before she burst out, “are you playing some massive space war MMO?” fluster he replied,” umm… no, I was doing calibrations.” He hit had a button on his suit shutting the window he had pulled up on his armor's visor. The hooded figures delicate hands strike out in accusation and she stammered, “ …and don’t you lie to me again,” her hands moved out of the display, “ I’m up loading the coordinates now –Kawaii command out.” Zaminn opened a new comm. channel and dictates, “prepare the prototype, I leaving on business. there is a disturbance in the Desu” And a sharp and worried response came over the comm., “but sir the prototype isn’t stable it could….” A choking sound is heard as Darth Zaminn clenched his fist. Another voice quickly replaced the first, “yes, Darth Master Mundthu Zaminn, It will be ready and waiting.”
 
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Zuli flew dazzlingly through the air over the south part of the woods, looking at the wooded area below with masterful alertness. As she soared through the air she hummed the chorus of PONPONPON by Kyary Pamyu Pamyu, since that was her favorite song that day. Her green striped coat sparkled in the sunlight and her beautiful blonde and blue mane danced in the breeze as she suddenly had a SPECTACULAR idea! She angled her wings downward and descended into a clearing in the woods below. She wondered how this amazing idea had evaded her previously.


"How could this idea have evaded me previously?", Zuli wondered aloud. She could make a trinket that would detect any vampires in a really large area with her super alicorn magic and zebra potion mastery! She trotted along the glade looking for the ingredients she needed to make the super complicated trinket.


Finally she spotted what she was looking for! A daisy!


"Snack time!", the super alicorn half zebra squee~ed. As she munched on her lunch, she happened across a small dark hut. What a mysterious place to build a house; all alone in the middle of vampire-infested woods... Someone must HATE to have company!


Naturally Zuli came to the conclusion that she should knock on the door and befriend the resident of the small abode.


*BAMBAMBAM* "IS ANYONE HOOOOOOOOME??" Zuli demanded, beating the door with both of her pristinely polished hooves.


No one answered. The door stared at her mockingly.


This door frustrated her. She decided to destroy it with her super alicorn magic.


*BOOM*





The door disintegrated instantly. With a toss of her brilliant mane Zuli entered the small hut.


It was damp, dark, and abandoned inside. No wonder the supposed pony inside didn't succumb immediately to her complete prettiness and utter beauty and let her inside posthaste. What WAS inside, conveniently enough, was every ingredient she needed to make the vampire trinket! What great news!


"What great news!" Zuli exclaimed loudly, "Now I can make the Vampire Trinket!"


She took the potion ingredients down from the meticulously organized, but dusty shelves.


"A tooth from a newt, the tail of a cockatrice, a fang from the jabberwocky, a big ball of wibbly wobbly timey wimey stuff, an eye of the basilisk from the Chamber of Secrets, and pocket sand! What a opportune assortment of ridiculously rare ingredients!" proclaimed the verdant mare. Zuli was unabashed at her extraordinary luck, seeing as she was always this fortuitous when it came to everything. She began her work on the extremely complicated trinket.


Moments later she held her finished product in an azure pocket of magic protruding from her horn. She concentrated briefly and conjured an enormous magical field by channeling her super alicorn magic through the trinket. She closed her eyes smarmily and brought up the vision spell in her mind's eye.


"Oh no..." Zuli whispered ominously. There were over 200 blinking red lights in the south woods alone! This was maximum terribleness! Every red light represented a vampire! There were over 200 vampires in the area!


Zuli knew that though her magic was all-powerful she couldn't beat that many vampires alone. She would have to return to The Perfectly Royal Princess of the League of Heart headquarters first and get backup. Before she could dash into action, however, the half zebra super alicorn had a thought: If there are this many vampires in the south woods there would be even more in the north where Raine-chan sempai was!


The north woods were even further away from the The Perfectly Royal Princess of the League of Heart Headquarters, meaning there could very well be an innumerable amount of vampires!


"Desu!" Zuli cursed out loud, making a >_< face and stamping the ground with her hoof.


Her friend and in turn her friend's two fluffy friends who were also by extension Zuli's friends might be in possible danger maybe! In payment for the super rare ingredients she had used for the trinket, Zuli tossed all of two bits onto the table in the middle of the hut. She was such a generous pony. Unfortunately the by product of trinket-making was a mutinous goo which quickly consumed and melted the bits, fuzing them to the table permanently. It was the thought that counted.


Zuli dashed out of the hut and took to the skies to save her friend before she could even be bothered to wonder what happened to the previous inhabitant of the hut and why they mysteriously abandoned their rare ingredients and meticulously organized home.
 
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The Darkangel Outcasts was not the only faction Kokoro has dealt with. Long ago, Kokoro's adopted mother, Queen Elsa, had recommended her to the The Perfectly Royal Princesses of the League of Heart, but the very sight of the sugary sweet castle made Kokoro gag. Even the train she rode on the way there burned her eyes with pink. And when the train attendant asked her if she would like the speciality super loli strawberry love-love blast funtime sugar tea, she could feel herself physically start to decay. As she left the station, Kokoro pulled her leather jacket tight around her, not because it was cold, but just because she didn't want to catch whatever doki-doki love disease the members of the faction seemed to carry. Not to mention that it seemed like every time she came back here it always seemed to be in the middle of a beautiful, warm, sunny day--disgusting. And why were there always so many people? Everywhere she looked there were angel wings, diamond studded tiaras, and marshmallowy dresses as big as Pluto. Kokoro began to wonder how there could be so many supreme princesses without them slaughtering each other. Isn't that what royalty is about? Then she began to wonder if there were any Game of Thrones Sues in the faction.


"Excuse me, peasant! Are you lost? I, the most kind and beautiful princess of The League of Heart, shall help you!" Kokoro was bombarded by a rainbow pigtailed, pink-eyed, royal monstrosity. As the young girl spoke she gestured wildly in all directions, pointing constantly back at herself and at the sky. The thing is, however, she just kept talking. She didn't ask any questions. The little creature acted as if she knew Kokoro better than Kokoro knew Kokoro. "Of course, if you're here to apply for the job as the stable hand, you'll want to go the opposite direction. But, I have to tell you, the maids tend to have much more benefits." This went on for about four minutes until Kokoro realized she didn't know how to make it stop.


Finally, Kokoro had had enough and gave into the first idea that came to mind. In the middle of the princess' sentence Kokoro reached out and grabbed her face. Not like a tender stroke of the cheek or and forceful clenching that would bruise the skin--no. Just a handful of sparkly, pink eyed, rainbowed hair supreme princess. When the Sue realized her face had been apprehended her arms limply fell by her side and she stopped talking.


"Um, excuse-"


"Shh," Kokoro shushed her quickly.


"Miss?"


"Shhhh."


"You hand is-"


"SHHHHHH!"


After a while the Sue decided to accept her fate and stopped trying to protest. After about twenty seconds of silence Kokoro was sated. She removed her hand and started to walk away, but realized she forgot something.


"This is for your service," Kokoro handed the princess 200 munney and left her paralyzed once again.


This, Kokoro decided, would be the last trip to the sugar castle she ever made.
 
Sparks flew as welding generated a fearsome shadow against the elevator door to the hanger bay of the base star. The door opened and the compressed and humid air generated a fog as Darth Zaminn stepped out. The Foreman of the Dry Dock stepped forward and saluted the Sith Lord,


“Sir the welders are checking the welds and the paint has dried.”


“Is the command console to specifications.”


“Are you certain it’s a highly unusual configuration?”


“IS IT TO SPECIFICATION, THIS IS THE LAST TIME FOREMAN!”


“Yes sir, all to spec.”


“I Will have a brief inspection before takeoff.”


The metallic sheen off of the rounded shape of the vessel created an intimidating glare. As his visor adjusted to the lighting the full form of the ship came into view. Two paw like landing skids stuck out like the majestic sphinx of Egypt. The black and white panda scheme was only enhanced by the simple jaw and the triangular teeth of the panda’s mouth which opened to release the tongue like landing platform. The forward viewing window formed the intimidating glare of the feisty panda. Entering the craft the bear theme continued covering even the most basic of objects. Darth Master Zaminn approached the cockpit looking over the controls. he stopped at the control wheel, the fierce grizzly themed wheels. He paused here for a moment before turning about.


Walking down the landing platform he commanded, “Bring me the Foreman!” they dragged the Foreman before Darth Master Zaminn. Clenching his fist as the Foreman choked, Darth Zaminn stated in his infamous manner, “YOU HAVE FAILED ME FOR THE LAST TIME, YOU FORGOT THE TASSELS.” It had been made clear, no one questioned Darth Master Mundthu Zaminn’s taste in accessories. Darth Zaminn entered his ship with a contingent of his infamous Ursa Bezerkers. He settled into the main hold, the on board computer beeped as a hologram came to life. A declaimer flashed stating that the message is pre-recorded.


Sailor moon appeared and began,


“Is this thing on, oh, well I don’t know how to work computers very well don’t ask me. Oh it’s on, well here it goes: Years ago you served in the Stu Wars. Now we beg you to help us in our struggle against the Alliance. I regret that I am unable to convey my request to you in person, but we have fallen under attack, and I'm afraid my mission has failed. I have placed information vital to the Kawaii No Kawaii Desu. This is our most desperate hour. Help me. You're my only hope. and send.”


Darth Zaminn stood-up and commanded to the pilot, “To the Sol system we are need at Juuban, at maximum Desu.”
 
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Kail Getawtamah Fakinway eyed the castle with distaste. It was too...what's the nice word for whiney, squeeley, girly, and cheesy? Ah yes! Pompous! It was to pompous for her. It made her want to grab Stonecutter and cut the entire thing down. Instead she calmed herself and slowly entered the castle of The League Of Heart...or as she liked to call them, Whiney Royal Pains. She passed by someone who handed a stereotype of a princess some sort of currency. "Good Day." She greeted and walked right past her. 'I swear if someone says "In the name of something I shall punish you!" or anything of the equivalent I will summon Mindsword and be done with them.'


@Lady Chess (Please I beg for interaction.)
 
Kokoro, deeply embarrassed by her run in with princess Sue, put her hood over her head to conceal her eyes and began to walk swiftly towards the main hall. A knightly looking woman with long silver hair greeted her as she passed, but Kokoro didn't have any interest in associating with anymore people in this faction than she absolutely had too. Kokoro was exhausted; she hadn't eaten, had a good sleep, or been able to polish Metalmorph in what seemed like forever. She was determined to deliver the documents and get off of the faction's grounds as fast as her body would allow her.


Not far in front of her Kokoro spotted one of the official guards of the faction's main queen. "Excuse me," Kokoro called out to the official looking personal, "I have some documents that need to be taken to the Queen. Do you think you could deliver this for me?"


"I'm sorry, madam. I do not have the jurisdiction to do that," the guard stated officially.


"You don't have-? Look, who do I need to give this to that has the... jurisdiction?" Kokoro mocked the guard.


The guard straightened his posture, puffing out his chest to Kokoro's rebuttal. "I'm afraid anyone with that kind of authority wouldn't be here at the moment. They would be out dealing with the increase of vampires threatening the region." Kokoro's eyes grew wide and the blood left her face. "You'd have better luck going out and trying to find them yourself if you want that delivered so badly."


Kokoro gritted her teeth, giving him a glare that could freeze molten lava. The guard turned to casually walk away, but Kokoro forcefully turned him by his shoulder and gripped him by his gold encrusted collar, lifting him into the air. Behind her she heard a series of girly gasps, but she could care less what some glitter-farts thought of her. "Let me tell you what. How about you go take care of the vampires and I'll wait here for you to bring the Queen back to me? Because from this angle," Kokoro shook him to reestablish that she was in the dominant position, "that seems to be the best idea to come out of this castle yet. So, how about you do your job so that I can get on with mine."


Sweat started to bead down his face as he gasped for air, trying to speak between breaths, "I..I can't leave the castle...I have to stay...to protect incase of...an invasion."


Kokoro shut her eyes and hung her head, dropping him with complete neglect as he landed with a groan on the stone marble floor. "Excuses. How useless. You can't even protect the queen you're sworn to serve."


Kokoro turned around to her accumulated glittering audience, some of which were turning their heads as if they'd not seen anything in the first place, some rushing the help the fallen patrolman, but most not paying any attention to the scene. They were just walking by as if it had nothing to do with them. "You're all useless. Your very queen is out there fighting and you live your lives in ignorance. What is truly most important to you?" Kokoro had said all this under her breathe, but one of her spectators remained, her blue eyes unwavering, looking completely unashamed to have witnessed the entire scene. It was the same silver haired warrior that had greeted her before. She wore a blade on her side and a long navy blue coat to her ankles. She seemed to demand Kokoro's attention.


"What? Do you have something to say?" Kokoro said, the agitation in her voice still echoing like solemn church bells.
 
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"Nothing much except that I couldn't agree with you more." She said as she brought up her blade. 'Mindsword.' She thought as she drew it. The moment she did the cheering of a thousand soldiers was heard and the air was filled with glory. "Someone take the papers and hand it to the queen the moment she get's here." A random guard responded with "Yes my lady." And approached the girl, holding out his hand to receive the papers. "I swear that these people keep getting dumber everyday." She said as she sheathed the sword.
 
Basacura updated The Doki to End All Doki with a new update entry:


Faction Headquarters

Factions now have specified HQs in the Maps section. It includes how each faction member can arrive at HQ as how they look.
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Raine was in deep doody, a place she did not like to be in whatsoever. She could not allow herself to die without being in the arms of Kakashi, which gave her enough mental strength to fight off and just completely slaughter two out of the now fifty adversaries she was facing, but not enough physical strength to annihilate them all.


"Drats," Raine swore, very unprincess-y of her. She knew that, for the first time ever, she would be defeated. This prompted her to take out a pen and paper and start writing her last will and testament. The birds, who were watching the fray from the nests, shed tears of depression as the helplessly watched the few minutes before Raine-hime would get the most brutal ass-kicking of her life. Raine kissed the will, which gave Kakashi all of her kunais and love, and stood up for the final confrontation.


"If I must die," she cried, "then I shall do so standing. Because sitting and dying is so not cool."


The vampires rushed towards her, fangs in the ready. Most of them were neigh but inches away from Raine's face, when suddenly she smiled a coy yet very attractive smile.


"Psyche! lols" Raine preformed a mystical transformation jutsu which turned the will into a kunai, known only as the Sacred Rainbow Kunai Ultimate Rainbow Unltimate Kunai Ultra Attack Nyan. Within milliseconds - or perhaps sooner - the vampire plague had been irradiated in the north, quickly overtaken by their tragically ironic allergy to rainbows. Raine struck a victory pose that made her butt look awesome.


From a distance she heard her friend Zuli arrive.
 
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Zuli descend below the cloud curtain just in time to see a huge flash of light that could never be mistaken for anything but the Sacred Rainbow Kunai Ultimate Rainbow Unltimate Kunai Ultra Attack Nyan. Raine-hime WAS fighting a lot of vampires!


The Zebra-Alicorn hybrid cried a million tears of despair inside her pony brain at the fact that she did not arrive in time to help her friend fend off the bloodlusting jerkwads. But this was no time to succumb to the depressions because that attack was super brilliant!


"That attack was super brilliant!" Zuli declared as she fluttered her wings, landing softly on the ground next to her princess friend.


Raine blushed bright red, probably thinking of her soulmate lover Kakashi-san for some reason.


"Thank you muchly. It required little effort." Raine replied as her fluffy ram companions cooed adorably in the background.


"It reminded me of Supernatural by Katy Perry only 20% cooler!" The verdant mare exclaimed, dancing around on her back hooves, standing up straight like her half-elf bestie. "Kiss me k-k-KISS me! Infect me with YOUR love and fill me with YOUR poisON"


"Take me t-t-TAKE me! Wanna be YOUR victim ready FOR abduction" Raine replied gleefully, filling the air with her most beautiful singing like the call of a siren except she wasn't a mermaid she was a half-ram. The pair continued their glorious duet to completion and when they finished they noticed that they were surrounded by a herd of creatures of all kinds that had ventured out of the forrest to hear their beautiful song. All of the creatures applauded their impromptu concert. Raine and Zuli bowed and graciously accepted the applause of their subjects, It was a pretty awesome concert after all.


"Oh yeah!" Zuli exclaimed, perking up suddenly, "I had meant to tell you there was a super huge gaggle of vampires heading toward the Perfectly Royal Princess of the League of Heart headquarters! We should probably go back and notify the queen and get backup before fighting any more on our own."


"Oh no! What such terribleness! We should totally go back to headquarters right away lol." Raine-hime agreed.


"Perfect!" Zuli replied, petting Moshi's soft wool with her hoof. "Anybutts I need to get out of these grungy scouting clothes. I am much too fabulous for this attire!" Raine nodded her head with fervor in agreement. Princesses should always look their best. For the sake of their subjects, of course.


So in agreement the two friends trotted/skipped into the glimmering sunset towards their faction's headquarters. Little did they know what they would find when they got there.
 
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Zuli and Raine found their faithful Pegasus-toted carriage. Zuli clopped in. To avoid being rude, Raine got on all fours and did the same. It had been a few days since they had been back to HQ, the sweet scent of Bath & Body Works's Warm Vanilla Sugar had faded into a more subtle scent, like Sephora's Roses De Chloe by Chloe. It made her sad, but then happy. And it wasn't because Kakashi's favorite fragrance was Roses De Chloe by Chloe, but, instead, because she doesn't stay sad for long.


"Yay, I'm happy!" Raine exclaimed. Zuli glanced up from filing her glorious hoof, puzzled by the outburst. Raine giggled in a way that made her not care anymore, so Zuli returned to her hoof-cleaning.


The clouds separated to reveal that the two were closing in on their beloved castle in the sky. Raine felt a surge all too familiar to her. A rare scowl crossed her face. She was still pretty hot, though, no lie.


"One of the Outcasts are here," Raine said coolly.


"Are you forizzle my nizzle?" asked Zuli. Raine confirmed it by pointing through the carriage's window at a gorgeous woman draped in a coat, wearing fishnets and a corset. Zuli honked in astonishment.


"And is that -?!" Zuli gasped. Raine cut her off before she could finish, coming to the same enraged realization as her pony friend.


"Yes. Kail."
 
Kokoro watched silently as the guard with the papers backed to the side, allowing an obvious area for the two ladies to dialogue. "So then, what's your excuse?" Kokoro slowly turned her gaze from the guard to Kail. "Why would you help someone from a different faction rather than jumping to the aid of your own queen?"


An awkward moment passed between the two before Kokoro had realized that she had said. Kokoro's eyes averted to stare off into the distance. "Nevermind, I don't care. Thank you for the assistance. I didn't mean to seem ungrateful."
 
"It's alright, truth be told I find most of these people useless." She replied as she put the sheathed sword at her side. "The guards are reliable...if not a bit too...what's the nice word for gullible? Ah yes! Obedient." She gestured to the other sues and stus who were ignoring the two. "These are too selfish to care. And the food here is sweet. Seriously, why do they not have diabetes already?"
 
Darth Zaminn and his contingent prepared for the coming battle by performing rituals known to the Sith for fortifying their minds against their greatest foes, other than the Jedi. A berserker slowly removed a box covered in only the most foul of Sith writings from the storage. Even as the master of the Sith language that Darth Zaminn was, the full meaning of the text still eluded him. There was one phrase that was clearly labeled, “one bag for one liter of boiled water, wait five Imperial minutes.” Many had tried to take the substance raw, but those who did found themselves in a state of Otaku that none could return from. The condiments were laid out; some chose honey, others chose ginger. With great delicacy, Darth Zaminn served his contingent, many of whom were his apprentices. Only with the great power of his Imperial Sith training could he resist the Otaku call. He poured them tea. His solders mentally prepared, he typed in the final approach vector.


The ship lurched forward as the planet gravity took hold. The free fall shook the loose cargo and the heat of the air friction was visible through the windows. The ship slowed as it reached a cruising altitude of 9001 ft. Darth Zaminn looked over the Berserkers: armor shined and weapons ready. An ensign scurried into the hold saluted and reported, “The HK-F-7d droids are ready for deployment and awaiting your order.” Zaminn ominously replied, “deploy the droids during our initial reconnoiter.” The ship was moving fast enough that the ocean below stirred as the craft passed. Land was fast approaching as the engines whirring slowed. The panda shaped ship proved even more fearsome as its shadow was cast across Juuban thanks to the setting sun. Small orbs appeared as the craft encircled the city and took position over the masses of faceless, horned and clawed hordes. Small explosions of rainbows, flowers, and beams of light could be seen through the city.


The panda gently landed at Arisugawa Park and the berserkers quickly formed their battle line while Sailor Mars and Sailor Jupiter approached. Makoto (Sailor Jupiter) spoke up first saying, “Meatball head has really done it this time. She is in over her head. The fiends have captured tuxedo mask and she all willy-nilly ran after him.” Zaminn replied “I see well…” he was interrupted by Sailor Mars slapping a seal on his Armor and beginning a purification ritual. Being a Sith Lord, Zaminn does not always give off the best aura in the other worlds. Zaminn cleared his throat, “I brought the 7ds with me and are ready to deploy my battle plan, but I could use your help.” Sailor Mars asked skeptically, “For what?” Zaminn grinned then announced, “For some



.” The Orbs began spewing multi colored lasers as Disco music played in the background. The Berserkers charged in what appeared to be a mad frenzy in every direction. Zaminn then asked, “Which way has Sailor Moon gone?”
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Zuli stared out the carriage window at the conversing duo on her faction's sacred property. The most hated member of the Perfect Princesses and a member of the Outcasts, the Princesses' rival faction, "Well we'll have to do something about THAT" remarked Zuli cooly. She stopped filing her hooves, they were already perfect anyways, and stood up. She trotted over to the window between the pagasi drawing the carriage and levitated 1 bit out of her saddlebags with her magic. She dropped it in midair and spun around and in a totally astonishing hackey-sack-esque fashion kicked the bit into the stallions' collection jar. Zuli was such a generous pony.


"I LEAVE YOU NOW, PLEBEIAN PEGESAI. YOUR PRINCESS THANKS YOU FOR YOUR DELIVERY TO HER FACTION HEADQUARTERS!" The Zebracorn kicked the door to the carriage open midair and skydived out and down to the castle below, paying no attention to the sign inside the carriage that said: taxi fee, 11 bits. The two pegasi looked at each other in confusion, how could they split a single bit between them? Why did the alicorn leave her friend? Why could they communicate telepathically all of a sudden? The world may never know.


Zuli gathered up an enormous burst of energy at the speed of light and performed a sonic rainboom at world record breaking speeds. No biggie. She decided to have a little fun with their guests. She used her super alicorn magic to turn invisible and landed to the ground with a graceful (yet QUIET) honk behind the duo. She crept sneakily without making a single sound behind Kail, the faction traitor. She super stealthily created a giant gust of wind that blew up Kail's skirt.


"Kyaaaaaaaa!" Kail squealed in embarrassment and confusion all super moe-like. "What is happening?" she questioned darkly with much mirth. "Meh. I have no idea. Also I don't really care." replied the corseted beauty nonchalantly. "Are we done here?"


Zuli wasn't satisfied yet. She dashed around Kail at the speed of light, creating a tornado as she spun around the human. Zuli suddenly stopped, sending the knight spinning and dizzy. For the grand finale The zebracorn flipped Kail's dress up, super embarrassingly (only to reveal another of exact same dress underneath, but exponentially embarrassing all the same.)


Kail groaned confusedly and Kokoro let out a small chuckle. This strange chain of events amused her dark tormented soul ever so slightly.


Raine burst through the doors of the carriage after paying the pegasi the remaining 21 bits of the friends' taxi fee. Zuli was such a silly pony. She was alerted to something strange occurring to her awesome ninja-elf-ram senses. Also there was a lot of wind coming from the courtyard in front of the castle. Either could have been the cause for the hairs on the back of her neck standing up. She rushed to the courtyard to see her friend cackling in laughter and ascending into the air, an abashed looking human and a slightly amused looking elf (although her soul still appeared very dark and tortured).


Zuli beat her wings and ascended to the air, unable to hold in her laughter anymore. That's what that snobby Sue GETS for being in the Perfect Princess faction when her shoes were so ugly and her attitude so terrible! (Well, maybe just one shoe. Zuli was a generous pony after all, so she gave Kail that much.)


"BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA" chortled the mare, tears streaming from her sparkling eyes in laughter. She flew to the top of a nearby fence, out of reach of the two humanoids. "You look so STUPID ya traitor!" she chided as her mane fluttered in the twilight.


Kail huffed and stomped her foot and gave the pony a look that could freeze a penguin in solid ice. An arctic penguin. Penguins like the cold. It is cold in the arctic. A even colder cold than penguins normally exist in would be needed to freeze a penguin so this is a good simile. Yay.


Zuli focused her gaze on Kokoro. Enemy rated higher on the Alicorn's list than Faction-traitor so Zuli decided to go a little easier on the elf. She spotted a nearby guard holding a packet that appeared to contain some forms stamped with the Outcast's Master's sign. IDEEEAAAAAA!


The verdant mare shot a temporary blinding spell out of her wing at the guard, causing him to collapse to the ground in utter and total confusion. "Let's play a game, outcast!" Zuli teased. Immediately a dark scowl crossed the elf's features. It was scarier than that girl from the ring. Super spooky. Zuli rushed up and grabbed the papers in a pocket of azure magic. "Catch me if you can!" she teased with a little wink as she shot up into the sky like a speeding bullet. Little did she know what the wrath of Kokoro Darkheart would bring her.
 
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