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Chapter 1: Autumn and Lynch
(Suggestions and Constructive Criticism Welcomed.)
Autumn and Lynch.. an odd set of young brother and sister. They got along quiet well for awhile, except for when Autumn got everythingn she wanted. This annoyed Lynch but he had always tried to shrug it off and didnt say anything so they barely ever argued. One thing they loved that they could actually do together was walking. Where to? Well their favorite swingset in the back of an old, abandoned house by the Whispering Creek. Autumn found it when she was 5 and Lynch was 8. Autumn was following her imaginary friends while Lynch followed her voice.
A few years passed and by the time they had reached this area once more ( 3 years later ) Lynch had been very overwhelmed due to his sister's constant spoiling. Lynch watched and tried to be happy for his sister but he never got anything, not even the simplest of toys.. Autumn had tagged along to walk to the swingset and along the way she just bragged and bragged about her new toy accessories.
Shrugging it off once more he walked swiftly once they were behind the house. Once he made it over to the swingset he rolled his eyes and looked at his sister with frustration "Well then little Princess. Just sit down and let me push you.. You always seem to get what you want.." He huffed and made the gesture for her to sit, though he was serious as well as sarcastic. Lynch had always pushed her since they'd found this spot so she ignored his comment and decided that she'd sit down for a light swing.
"You know, your such a brat sometimes.. no, majority of the time" He said this very angrily and glared at her from behind.
A bit aggitated due to his aggressiveness she rolled her eyes "Okay then, Lynch.." As Autumn sat she gripped the chains of the swing tightly and smiled. The more she was pushed the more she began to wander and talk about the things she wanted. "Oh! And I want a fluffy, blue unicorn toy!" This made Lynch angry, very angry.. He couldn't stand this anymore and wanted to leave or her to. Lynch tried very hard to tone the rest out but he couldn't and his anger overtook him. Pushing Autumn with all of his strength, he made her go even higher than necessary. Autumn shrieked with fear as she flew up into the air "LYN-" Before she could finish she fell onto the ground with what sounded like a loud crunch. In Lynch's quick flash of anger, he spots his sister there on the ground a few feet in front of him. It was like.. he had blacked out.
Lynch's eyes then stormed with fear and tears, running over to Autumn he pretended she was okay. "C-Come on Autumn.. This isn't funny. Don't play this game on me." Autumn was dead.. she'd gone up too high, too fast, fell too hard.. Lynch had many emotions go over him and unable to help it he ran. Lynch waited awhile before deciding to call the cops from his neighbors phone.
(This is just my roughdraft and it has been edited, I think it's better. I'm going to move to Chapter 2.)
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