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Poems for my lovely friends

Rida

sᴏᴍᴇᴛʜɪɴɢ | ᴅᴇsᴛʀᴜᴄᴛɪᴠᴇ
I too find my poetry to be downright horrid, so feel free to hate @Annabella and @NimbusTheCat


This is the one I wrote last night:






✲´*。.❄¨¯`*✲。❄。*。¨¯`*✲✲*`¯¨。*。❄。✲*`¯¨❄.。*´✲✲´*。.❄¨¯`*✲。❄。*。



The Superficiality of Love




The sweet chime of church bells, ringing with joy


as two souls vow to love each other


'til death do them part


To cherish and to hold, in sickness and in health


To be honest and true, and to persevere against all odds


The clang of church bells, sending shudders down backs


as two souls chain themselves down


hoping for death to come by, fingers outstretched


to end the misery and pain


The illusion of love now faded, but faded too late


Why confine yourself to a cage?


Forced to live by someone else's rules, by someone else's standards


To provide for someone who you'll never really know


A stranger, silently changing your very being


Turning you into a monster of emotions


Picking petty fights over the most trivial of things


Spitting lie after lie to cover up for the sins


that ooze from the inner depths of their rotten core


And when you realize you want out, you realize too late


for the papers are just an arm's length away


but the love you once felt is long gone


✲´*。.❄¨¯`*✲。❄。*。¨¯`*✲✲*`¯¨。*。❄。✲*`¯¨❄.。*´✲✲´*。.❄¨¯`*✲。❄。*。✲´*。.❄¨¯`*✲。❄。*。¨¯`*✲✲*`¯¨。


And now I'm just cherry picking from some pretty old ones. I hate them as well, but I guess they were my pride and joy back then.


The Forgotten Tree; A Combined Haiku

Its leaves are lifeless

Alone and reeking of death

The Forgotten Tree

On a remote hill

Distanced from society

Any life destroyed

A sudden god-send

A shaky watering can

A beautiful sight

Many months later

Its leaves and branches have life

Thanks to a kind soul

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------




I don't know what the shit this is but here you go:


Deep Love

(just to clarify, no, this is not based off me)

Your image clouds my mind

But it all just makes no sense

How am I falling for you

How did you cross my fence

How did you break them down

The protective walls I made

How did you catch my eye

And cut me open like a blade

At first nothing seemed right

Nothing easy to comprehend

Then all at once you had me

Too engulfed to try and defend

Like the power of deep sleep

First unhurried, then oh so quick

You swept me off my feet

And had me utterly lovesick

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------




And then there's whatever demon in my mind that had me write this up:


Sociophobia






A lifetime of hiding in a shell


Forever ringing insecurity's bell



Eternally stuck in life's quicksand



Unable to move, or speak, or stand



Restrained by the critic that hides in all



That sneers at every blunder and fall



Paranoia has locked me in a crate



Sealing me to an insufferable fate
 
Rida said:
I too find my poetry to be downright horrid, so feel free to hate @Annabella and @NimbusTheCat
This is the one I wrote last night:






✲´*。.❄¨¯`*✲。❄。*。¨¯`*✲✲*`¯¨。*。❄。✲*`¯¨❄.。*´✲✲´*。.❄¨¯`*✲。❄。*。



The Superficiality of Love




The sweet chime of church bells, ringing with joy


as two souls vow to love each other


'til death do them part


To cherish and to hold, in sickness and in health


To be honest and true, and to persevere against all odds


The clang of church bells, sending shudders down backs


as two souls chain themselves down


hoping for death to come by, fingers outstretched


to end the misery and pain


The illusion of love now faded, but faded too late


Why confine yourself to a cage?


Forced to live by someone else's rules, by someone else's standards


To provide for someone who you'll never really know


A stranger, silently changing your very being


Turning you into a monster of emotions


Picking petty fights over the most trivial of things


Spitting lie after lie to cover up for the sins


that ooze from the inner depths of their rotten core


And when you realize you want out, you realize too late


for the papers are just an arm's length away


but the love you once felt is long gone


✲´*。.❄¨¯`*✲。❄。*。¨¯`*✲✲*`¯¨。*。❄。✲*`¯¨❄.。*´✲✲´*。.❄¨¯`*✲。❄。*。✲´*。.❄¨¯`*✲。❄。*。¨¯`*✲✲*`¯¨。


And now I'm just cherry picking from some pretty old ones. I hate them as well, but I guess they were my pride and joy back then.


The Forgotten Tree; A Combined Haiku

Its leaves are lifeless

Alone and reeking of death

The Forgotten Tree

On a remote hill

Distanced from society

Any life destroyed

A sudden god-send

A shaky watering can

A beautiful sight

Many months later

Its leaves and branches have life

Thanks to a kind soul

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------




I don't know what the shit this is but here you go:


Deep Love

(just to clarify, no, this is not based off me)

Your image clouds my mind

But it all just makes no sense

How am I falling for you

How did you cross my fence

How did you break them down

The protective walls I made

How did you catch my eye

And cut me open like a blade

At first nothing seemed right

Nothing easy to comprehend

Then all at once you had me

Too engulfed to try and defend

Like the power of deep sleep

First unhurried, then oh so quick

You swept me off my feet

And had me utterly lovesick

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------




And then there's whatever demon in my mind that had me write this up:


Sociophobia






A lifetime of hiding in a shell


Forever ringing insecurity's bell



Eternally stuck in life's quicksand



Unable to move, or speak, or stand



Restrained by the critic that hides in all



That sneers at every blunder and fall



Paranoia has locked me in a crate



Sealing me to an insufferable fate
GIRL, DO NOT INSULT THESE MASTERPIECES. Seriously, man, you got some Edgar Allen Poe/Emily Dickinson level shit going on here. The first one literally made me rethink basically everything I ever thought about marriage and I could just feel the pain and longing in it. The second one created a very realistic scene and it was beautiful. The third one I just really liked and you wrote it like a pro, my friend. And the last one, well, the last one was really creepy but also oddly relatable at the same time, if you know what I'm saying. All of them were amazing and beautiful like you and I've said too much so I'll just drop this here.
 
@NimbusTheCat


I absolutely love you, but what you have on are Mom Goggles, and your love for your child is blinding your judgement between what is good and what is plain ugly.


I dunno, I haven't written any poetry in a while so a majority of these are old.
 
*rips off mom goggles* *eyes come out with them* I don't even need eyes to feel the superior artistry that radiates from your work.


Also can someone call the hospital? I can't feel my face.


@Rida
 
NimbusTheCat said:
*rips off mom goggles* *eyes come out with them* I don't even need eyes to feel the superior artistry that radiates from your work.
Also can someone call the hospital? I can't feel my face.


@Rida
Awh, you're too sweet, Mum.


Mother, I haven't gotten the letter from my gifted children program irl. I'm freaking out. WHAT IF THEY THINK I'M NOT SPECIAL ANYMORE?!


No need for an ambulance, love. Dr. Quinzel will fix that right up...(} :) )
 
Rida said:
Awh, you're too sweet, Mum.
Mother, I haven't gotten the letter from my gifted children program irl. I'm freaking out. WHAT IF THEY THINK I'M NOT SPECIAL ANYMORE?!


No need for an ambulance, love. Dr. Quinzel will fix that right up...(} :) )
I am just telling the truth, dear.


WHAT?! How dare they! You are undoubtably special my lovely daughter, and I'm sure they think so as well. It probably just got lost in the mail, or they haven't sent it out to anyone yet, or something.


*backs up* Oh, uh, would you look at that? Suddenly I feel a whole lot better! Well, I'll catch you later, got a lot of stuff to do! *turns to run* *crashes into wall*
 

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