Lucem
Ten Thousand Club
I just woke up.
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Sure, I'll go give it a look.Sergeant Sass] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/2664-lucem-tenebris/ said:@Lucem Tenebris[/URL] I finally got around to adding relationships for Asher and Marcella. Would you look over what I put in for each of their relationships with Raito and let me know if there's anything else that you think I should mention?
Then I've accomplished my goal.DaughterofAthena said:It sounds very generic.
*curdled in corner still, thinking it's just an attempt to comfort her*Lexielai said:It's beautiful.
Yes. I really liked adding in that portion for Marcella because it gives Marcella a lot more room for development. As I was writing these, I realized that she is really just seeking everyone's approval and when she doesn't see it, she fights harder in an attempt to earn it. As for Asher, more often than not, Marcella drags him out on missions before it gets too bad more often than not.Lucem Tenebris] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/14219-sergeant-sass/ said:@Sergeant Sass[/URL]
I think the relationships are already captured pretty well. Marcella feeling like Raito doesn't understand is something I like, since he really does. He tried to prove himself to the guild after reflecting on his hostile behavior and continues to try, since he wants to prove Sabertooth is the best and still feels guilty for the former Master's death six months ago. They're similar in that regard, but Raito still has trouble putting his true feelings into words. He just doesn't want to see her or anyone else get hurt, so he'd be a bit tougher on her than others, since her actions are particularly risky.
The relationship with Asher is also good. The Novine siblings would definitely be the most troublesome members of the guild. Since the Slayer continues to do nothing even after scoldings, I'm sure Raito would become physical at times. If he refused to take on any jobs, he'd force one on him and kick Asher out of the guild hall until he finished. It would be similar to those that refuse to work not getting to eat.
conversation.... signs of life.... signs that people are paying attention to the ooc...CelticHero37 said:A spark?
I do not see the name "Attention" anywhere on your profile. You lie.CelticHero37 said:I named myself Attention, now you owe me 10 bucks.