I'm honestly a bit on the fence about this quirk. Can you list all of the phone like abilities so I can get a better understanding of it?
Can you tone down the power of this down a bit? Your character is just a first-year after all so having him being able to knock down buildings is a bit much.
Yeah, I'm gonna have to reject this quirk. My issue is that's "creating machines" is too broad a power and can easily be abused.
Change the backstory to mention that he choose Wellston instead of U.A and your character is accepted.Name:
Fengzhi Wu
Nicknames:
Feng
Desired Hero Name:
The Behind The Scenes Hero "Overwatch"
Age:
16
Gender:
Male
Appearance:
Hero Costume:
The whole helmet is just cosmetic except for the visor which works as glasses meaning Fengzhi doesn't need to wear his own while he has the helmet on. He also plans to have a breather kit installed allowing him to breathe underwater and breath in toxic fumes without harm this, however, has not been added in yet.
Fengzhi hero outfit also consists of a pair of gloves that at the knuckle area consists metal plating in a similar form of knuckle duster, this is since his quirk doesn't make him superhuman in the sense many quirks do.
Height:
5'9
Weight:
144 lbs
Personality:
Fengzhi is an athletic, rustic, and friendly boy who is searching for adventure. Fengzhi is a pretty happy guy, he has a brave and heroic personality and will risk his lives for friends, enemies, and strangers alike.
Fengzhi possesses a rather strong competitive streak. Fengzhi has a lot of self-confidence and possesses a large ego to match it, making him sassy, cocky, quick-witted and sometimes overconfident in his abilities. He has a lot of attitude, shows a lot of sarcasm through his gestures and has a narcissistic tongue. He often jokes around to lighten the mood, but will also take any opportunity to taunt and mock his opponents, and takes many of the lesser situations he faces lighthearted. He is also not generally modest when it comes to his abilities and is very proud of his skills, smug and a showoff.
Fengzhi also possesses an indomitable force of will; in situations where most others would give up and resign themselves to defeat or imprisonment, and in situations where he is severely outnumbered and outgunned, he always forges on, never loses faith in himself and never quits or submits.
At the same time, Fengzhi has a big and kind heart and possesses a lot of righteousness. He is fully committed to helping out those in any kinds of trouble, however, he can, even if his actions will be met with contempt or have consequences, and cannot look away when somebody else is in trouble. He always keeps his word and is willingly puts himself at risk to help others, taking on any challenge that confronts him without hesitation, though he usually sees his heroics and fighting evil as an opportunity to have fun, making him somewhat of a thrill-seeker and enjoys any challenge that passes him.
However, in times of crisis, he focuses intensely on the task at hand as if his personality had undergone an astonishing change. Fengzhi is extremely loyal to his friends and is willing to put his life on the line for them without any due consideration. Though he sometimes teases them or acts rude, he cares generously for all his friends and if they are in danger, Fengzhi will put them above all else at hand. Including his own life. While he is willing to look out for his friends he wouldn’t cooperate with them as he would find that doing so puts them in harm's way. Fengzhi is known for having an indomitable will and a lot of stubbornness. He is incredibly strong of character, possessing a never-wavering faith in himself and never gives in to his own weaknesses.
Fengzhi is also a genius, however, this is only whenever he has switched on his frontal lobe. While his quirk allows him to change his personality he outright refuses to do it believing that he is who he wants to be already. He has only ever changed his personally once and that was to a very morbid and grim on that he used to scare some bullies.
Background:
Fengzhi was born in Keikei City, China, to an unknown family whose gene heritage has had only one hero ever come out of it....well that was until his father who sadly passed away while doing his job when Fengzhi was only four years old. He moved to Japan at the age of 5 and the transition for him was hard he bearly spoke the language and he was often bullied for this fact, not only that but the fact he was quirkless (or thought to be) didn't help.
It wasn't until he was twelve that his Quirk was fully figured out. His Quirk had been manifested from birth but it was not noticed until he got into a fight with bullies due to the fact that his life didn't push him to use it until that point, his keen intellect seemed to have jump-started it, using his body as a tool rather than a part of him, all of a sudden, he forced a dose of adrenaline and the sensation of pain was disconnected from him. It was here that Fengzhi decided what he wanted to do and that was become a hero.
He spent the next few years researching the various hero academies and by his last year of middle schools he narrowed it down to U.A and Shiketsu High School. He couldn't decide which out of the two to pick so he went to the person he went to most his problems with, his mother. It took the two a while but they ended up deciding on the best one in the country U.A.
Quirk:
Self-Control
Self-Control is present at birth and continues developing. This Quirk functions by allowing the frontal lobe to manipulate the other parts of the brain. With this ability, Fengzhi has direct and total control over his mental structure, being able to manipulate at will his own emotions, sensations, perceptions, consciousness, memories, personality and everything connected to his mind, allowing peak efficiency. In other words, the true full potential of a normal human being through the removal of the mental limits of the brain, allowing conscious control over one's own brain.
If the user is sufficiently skilled, it becomes possible to enhance their own mind. This ability also grants Fengzhi a certain degree of immunity to mind-altering abilities, but only if his consciousness located in the frontal lobe is stronger than the mind-altering power, or if he attempts to forcefully shut down or block a part of the brain that is being controlled, he has yet to figure out how to use this technique efficiently as he sometimes temporarily goes dumb when he deactivates a wrong part of the brain, such as his motor functions. Fengzhi is unable to turn off his frontal lobe, only having the ability to turn it on, making him susceptible to mind-controlling attacks that are powerful enough to overwhelm his consciousness. Fengzhi has almost complete control over the movements and functions of his muscles and nerve impulses in his veins, being able to move with remarkable acrobatic skill due to the efficiency of his movements, he is however, unable to make his body do things that are considered superhuman, like detaching parts of the body, growing limbs, regenerating entire scars, etc.
Other than the brain structure and it's appearance being different from normal, no other part of the user's appearance is affected, other than Fengzhi's yellow eyes seemingly glowing red on the Infrared spectrum when he activates his Quirk's powers. That is why Fengzhi never realized he had a Quirk until he activated it.
Toned it down.
I'm still gonna go with no. Sorry.
Accepted.
Can you list all the support items your character uses? But other than that, your character is fine.
Can you list all of the effects, please?
So it's like telekinesis, but it only works in the smoke? I'm admittedly a bit on the fence about the transmuting objects into smoke thing, as that doesn't really seem connected with the rest of the quirk.
Just making sure, but how does he propel himself around with this quirk?
Yup, sure! Got rid of the transmuting into smoke thing. Hope everything is alright now. Also yes, it's like telekinesis with a limited range, but including a visual hindrance for the enemies.
Delinquent
So like C-moon from Jojo's bizarre adventure?
Accepted.Name: Kia Nok
Appearance:
Height: 6' 2" (188cm) Weight: 180lbs (81kg)
Dressed head to toe in a mixture of formal designs and high designer fashions standing tall with a great deal of refinement and grace yet speaking with a soft clear tone.
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Costume:
A mixture of heavy ceramic blaistic armor and reactive plates while providing no limits in movement allowing them to direct attacks to the more protected places as needed, the design itself acting like a large antenae to boost the ability to recieve a signal and appears most prominant across her vital locations, spine and other areas. The blindfold like mask is infact linked to multiple cameras around her suit as well as linking to a wide array of monitoring or analytical systems, interacting with her quirks wifi and bluetooth like abilitys. Finally she carries an array of items to support her in efforts, such as external cameras, small grenades of various types with the most notable being a large longsword with extendable handle that may be sheathed horizontally across her back and a similar collapsable shield that is capable of combining with the former.
Hero Name: Cell
Personality:
Calm, polite and reserved to a fault though with a mild amount detatchment towards the plights and struggles of those less fortunate, they attempt to keep up the best of appearances with a friendly approach, somewhat becoming more difficult with severe OCD in several aspects of her life. They hold a high interest in the latest of technologys and social media in general seemingly intensly curious about people as a whole regardless of the topic. They never the less display a unnatural dedication and drive towards their commitments, placing such objectives above nearly all else be it their hero training, school work, or promises made.
Background:
Heiress to the Nok Corperation empire, a multinational communication conglomerate with subsideries in a wide array of media and technology companies as well. Given her privledge she would grow up relatively sheltered with limited contact to people outside of the upper class circles, being privately educated and trained by tutors as she was groomed for the role she would one day take on herself. Though over time her facination with the world of heroes would only grow until the point she would fortunately be able to convince her father to let her participate in such under the guise of promoting the company to the public, though this did lead to her training being escalated significantly it was worth the efforts in her mind. Now ready to embark in a new adventure into the more public circles so excitedly anticipates her attendance at the academy.
Quirk: Phone (Mutant)
This quirk grants the user incredible durability as well as several phone like features such as a camera, calls, texting, wifi, flashlight and a incredible mind when it comes to memory or calculations. She is also capable of storing and receiving information on small card like objects. However such abilitys become more limited in areas of poor reception as well as making her vulnerbale to magnetic forces and extended use of her features drain her stamina requiring regular recharging.
Sorta similar to the Naval Laser where the blast would push Yuga back accept wherever Kama's hands are directed, he goes in the opposite direction. For example if he directed his hands behind him he'd boost forward or to the left, he'd boost to the right.
Bit of a problem here, you can't attend a hero school with a criminal record. Naturally, that doesn't mean that your character can't have committed crimes, just that she can't have been caught.
Name: Paige Bolvin
Appearance:
Height: 5' 5" (167cm) Weight: 130lbs (59kg)
Normally drawn to the high fashions if somewhat unusual styles under the proclamation of "Bringing it back" or "Trendsetting" their wardrobe is a complex mix of recent and retro styles in voluminous amounts, with countless bands, beads, belts and other accessories. Standing at an above average height the youthful beauty holds herself with peppy confidence, thigh length azure hair whipping around her curved and athletic form with dual ruby eyes peering out from beneath a straight cut fringe.
Gender: Female
Age: 16.
Costume:
Created from a custom frictionless material in a streamlined designed to allow the user to reach maximum velocity while also being insulated from colder environments and armoured for protection against bludgeoning or abrasion damage as well as small-arms. The outfit also includes several gyroscopic systems and compasses to aid her in maintaining correct orientation and attempt to mitigate nausea from her movements, as well as googles with GPS and a rebreather for low oxygen environments. The gauntlet-like gloves they wear are mouldable with the ability to alternate between Impact enhancing gauntlets and claw-like designs, their boots having similar properties to allow for normal walking despite frictionless construction. To augment her ability she also carries multiple collapsable fields with various grenade type gadgets within them concealed along her wrists as well as a small pack of useful items such as wire ties, bottles of Pepto-Bismol and chewable, nails, rope among other items.
Hero Name: C-Moon
Personality:
A conflicting girl with energy and great passion, confidence being there own downfall with their certainty of several topics often being proven quickly false with a frightening speed at times though rarely letting such dissuade them. Still, she does have an aggressive streak when triggered, her snapping anger going overboard at times to the point of yelling at inanimate objects with a deep cynicism which strangely can quickly change to laughter. Known at times to come out with the most outlandish statements some of which may be serious but others simply a cynical jest, ranging from "Fire alarms are for babies who can't handle being on fire", "If your short every bump in the road is a hill you can die on" to others like "The sea is basically the sky of the ground". For a better word, the girl comes across as quirky, with a vast array of seemingly unconnected interested but never the less a free spirit at heart always enjoying the new and exciting experiences who rarely holds a grudge for long.
Background:
A Quebec born from a middle-class family with established roots in Canada's history, albeit the less ethical underbelly. Embroiled within such with the kickbacks and selective project approval used to shape the city in the prefered image, such as approving maintenance outside a new business that was not playing by the rules and said work taking far longer than expected due to the contractors used with the end result of loss of business to point of moving or going out of business. Sadly this was simply the way of the city, though always wanting to break free of it with long dreams of flying the skies it was this that birthed her desire to be a hero, no grand vision or altruistic pursuit, just a means to an end to success and freedom. Its been this somewhat selfish desire to escape the world around them to their own idealised one that has fueled her resolve.
Quirk: G-Shift (Emitter)
This quirk grants the user a unique control over the directional gravity in the local area around them to produce a variety of effects the most notable being the falling to or walking along surfaces as if such was the new floor to her. Initially, this is a personal effect but with the focus can extend its range to several meters around or create projectiles of with fields being isolated to other targets through the power of such is far greater with touch, with the most commonly used effect being the ability to negate collision damage from falls into surfaces. Touching targets can modify the gravitational force acting upon the target even as to go so far as reversing it. The level of effects is directly linked to the user's physical stamina requiring short rest periods to recharge between extended uses with the more strenuous uses having a shorter duration while a passive float being far simpler after activation and hence longer. Overuse can cause nausea, dizziness and disorientation with confusion towards the real directions affecting their coordination.
Accepted.
Name: Mitsuo Akiyama
Appearance: Mitsuo is a 5’7” 135lb student who possesses a mutant type quirk. Like most students with a mutant type quirk, his body composition has been changed. For Mitsuo, this change manifested has pitch black skinned with subtle blue hues. His skin is speckled with glowing white particles that are far easier to see in darker settings. Mitsuo eyes and short cut hair both share a blue color. Mitsuo works hard to keep himself in shape.
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Personality: Mitsuo embodies the saying “work hard, play hard.” He is generally in a mellow mood but is known to sometimes get overly passionate about the things he loves. He is a focused and driven student, and when his work his done he often roams around looking for excitement where ever he can find it. Mitsuo is a natural socialite; he loves to have long conversations with friends and social activities. He also has a bit of a competitive streak and sometimes comes off as stubborn. The most uncomfortable thing for Mitsuo are people who poke and prod at his skin activating his quirk without his permission. Mitsuo is most happy when he is among good friends.
Background: Mitsuo birth signified a great change in his parents’ life. His mother’s quirk opens up portals on surfaces she’s touching, and his father’s quirk is impenetrable rubber skin. Before Mitsuo and his brother were born, his parents were stary eyed criminal lovers. Luckily, they never got caught before they finally settled down to run a convenience store and raise their family. Their twin sons know nothing of this past. Mitsuo owes his mellow personality to his father and his fiery passion from his mother. Mitsuo’s parents were elated to see one of their sons headed off to a hero school knowing that their kids would never lead the kind of lifestyle they had in the past.
Mitsuo best friend and twin brother is Katsuo. His quirk is very similar to Mitsuo's. Katsuo can open up portals on his skin, but they can also be opened up on surfaces he touches. It’s something he has to purposefully do, though, and doesn’t work automatically as Mitsuo's [Rift Skin] does. It was his brother that urged Mitsuo to go to a hero school in the first place. Katsuo had noticed how Mitsuo love to lend aid to others and made Mitsuo promise to not let his talent go to waste.
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