Marius Drăguţ Poartă

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Humanoid Typhoon

Marius Dr?gu? Poart?


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Character Name:

Marius Dr?gu? Poart?

Character Age:

301

Character Race:

Dark Hunter

Character Gender:

Male

Character Occupation:

Daimon hunter

Character Link:

Description:

Now known as Marron Peltier-Poart? or lovingly as Marry.​



General Information


His hair is pitch black with odd streaks of white scattered throughout it. The usual style he keeps it in is messy and down to about the middle of his neck. Occasionally he's been known to wear it in a tight, low ponytail or cut short and spiked up. His eyes are a gorgeous deep goldenrod and his face slender with high cheekbones and the slightest under bite that gives him a constant pouty look.


Personality:


Personality: He is a very sweet man with a heart of pure gold and capacity for love beyond any imaginable. Even with the chance for revenge right in front of him and absolutely deserving every right to it, he chose to not act on it. Even many many years later when he met his brother again he found it in his heart to forgive him for what he had done.


Backstory: Formerly Romanian prince he was abandoned on the streets at the age of 10 simply because he had gone blind and his parents could simply not have a child with a 'defect' as one of their heirs. He was able to survive by begging for several years, but after a while he turned to prostitution as a means of staying alive. Thinking that he had no other choice due to his disability. He hated it with a passion, but was able to survive for a long time by those means. Motivated by the thought of proving that he could make it without them. Unfortunately, due to the conditions he was living in, he ended up catching tuberculosis. Rumors spread and his ever worsening appearance frightened people into believe that he was a vampire. The poor man was almost let free, until his brother Samuel stepped in and declared that his brother was supposed to be dead. This sealed Marius' fate. The people panicked and strung him up on a cross, where his brother drove a stake through his heart. His cry of suffering was heard by the Goddess Artemis. She came and offered him a new life, immortality and many riches. All for the price of his soul and becoming a warrior for her. More Recently: He has fallen in love with a young bearswan that he had known for a very long time. He had saved her when she was a child and the affection only grew from there. From idolizing him, to admiring him then finally falling in love. It was a risky love though, for she was already married to another. In their world this was a highly risky affair, especially with her husband being a werewolf and her own family being quite protective. Through all of the trials they were able to make it through and be happily married with five children, two adopted and three lovely little boys of their own.


Magic/Spells:


He has the ability to project his aura into an attack and use it to power up his muscles for devastating attacks. However, it comes at a cost. Destroying his muscles and forcing him to sleep while they heal. Due to his blindness and the added skills that he was granted. His other senses are astounding and beyond compare.


Weapons:


Twin scimitars Clawed gauntlets Occasionally a pole-arm


Other:


Likes: Flowers, small fluffy animals, sweet things, spicy foods, when this one spot where his neck meets his shoulder is kissed or nibbled, the feeling of his love's claws on his back Dislikes: Too much noise, big crowds, sour foods, green peppers and onion, anything bad smelling, boats Fears: Bees, talking to women one on one (It tends to go away the more he gets to know them), Mother in-law Random tidbits: ~His birthday is April 28, 1713 and he was born in Sibiu, Romania ~After he was abandoned he changed his name to Marron. It was to start anew and because he hated it due to it coming from his family. ~His favorite scents are lilac, Jasmine and cedar. (and anything his family is cooking.) ~He can't cook to save his life...seriously. This man somehow burnt water... ~Don't be too fooled by his sweetness. He has a nasty side to him. Get on his bad side and you will regret it. ~He may be loyal now, but he used to be nearly impossible to deal with. Rebelling every time he had the chance to. ~He is a master of many instruments, but Spanish Guitar is his favorite. He loves nothing more than to serenade his love or sing lullabies to the children. ~ He has been known use the alias: Salvator Vitaez. This is when he is visiting the orphanage or an old friend. ~He turns to absolute mush in the presence of any adorable, fuzzy animal or children or his love. ~He still has a slight Romanian accent. It becomes more prevalent as he gets angry or frustrated. (and if you really make him mad expect a full blown shouting match in Romanian.) ~He's made it perfectly clear that nobody is allowed to call him Old Man until he's a grandpa. That hasn't stuck though.... ~He gets horribly seasick.


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Personality


Full of very admirable traits, some I can see being well Roleplayed in various situations, I think that overall, his Character Sheet would have more flesh to it if it had some more unpleasing traits as well. No one is perfect, and while the character sounds like a good one, it also seems a bit too good. I read his background before writing this portion, and I think it has lot of potential. One thing I think would be good is if you made his personality and backstory fit with each other and twist together, instead of seemingly being two separate parts that had no correlation with each other.


Backstory


I think the Backstory was very well thought out, and was rather original, myself not seeing something like it in my time being on this Website. I really enjoyed the tale of his determination even though betrayal was a very rife thing in his life. I think that him being blind was a nice touch, and the whole "being thrown out because of a defect" was a very nice addition, and really made his backstory work out. Again, the only really thing that makes the backstory seem a bit "improvable" is the events that happen don't affect how he feels about life, but overall, I really enjoyed it.


Overall



Overall, I really like this one, very simple, yet entertaining. I really do like the powers, and the drawbacks, and the little tidbits that you put under Other section. It made him a bit more human, and I really liked the pictures of him that you placed. I think you did a really good job on this, and I hope you have great fun with this character! Question, before I end this, did you draw those pictures? If so, awesome job.
 
Thank you so much! This will be really helpful in improving the character further. and I drew the bottom two, the top one is just an image I found.
 

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