Lucian "Lucy" Grant

A woman slowly approaches you with a laptop. She takes a seat in front of you and looks you square in the eyes. A smile is on her face as she opens it up and says,"I'm just going to ask you a couple of questions. Make sure you answer truthfully."


Let me get a good look at you.:


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What's your name?:


Lucian Grant, my friends call me Lucy sometimes


How old are you?:


20


Are you male or female?:


Im a Guy


Did you come here willingly? Or did your parents let you go?:


I came here willingly but by my parents request.


Can you recite your experiment number?:


#605


How would you describe yourself?:


I guess id call myself reserved, im slow to show emotions or opinions most of the time


What was life like before you came here?:


Well i was doing pretty good, i was pretty famous for being quite the talented martial artist, my age is what made it so impressive. I won almost every tournament i entered, i was competing with the professionals, but then my parents voluntold me to come here......and that was that. 


Is there anything that upsets you?:


People that do whatever is asked of them, not walking their own path (im kind of a hypocrit)


What about something that brightens up your day?:


A good sense of humor


Let me see what the lab has prepped for you experiment number #605:


(His brain will be enhanced to have remarkable reaction speeds.)


Anything else I should really know about or care about?: 


(He will also be receiving a prototype weapon to go well with his new abilities. A metal staff with 3 voice activated extra functions.)
(Stun: used to try and incapacitate targets, may need prolonged contact in order to be effective)
(Smoke: Releases a smoke bomb)
(Lethal mode: produces blades from each end for more dangerous tasks.)


Once all the questions were answered, the woman stood up from her seat and thanked you before leaving you with two guards who were more than happy to escort you back to your section
 
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Okay, there are two problems.


1) The boy is 17...the lab wouldn't really employ a 17 year old. they'd most likely hire someone a bit older than that. You need to remember that it isn't just teens that are being taken away to these labs, there are some adults thrown into the mix.


2) The muscle thing is already used by another character. I'm trying to avoid duplicate powers, so you might have to change that. You can keep the reflex thing (which in and of itself is a pretty cool idea if you ask me). 


3 *this is kinda just me being a bit nit-picky so you don't have to follow this one*) Why did he get the prototype over the other guards? What makes him worthy of that privilege?
 
1) I can change it to 19 if that's any better. I just wanted him to be young so he can relate to the other players characters a little better.


2) that's cool I don't need the muscle thing


3) well a staff is a bit tricky to master so a martial artist would be the perfect candidate. But to be completely honest I just thought it was cool.


4) sorry for the long time before the reply. I was busy the last few days
 

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