Jade Rhea

Shura

Pounce Ninja
Jade Rhea

Introduction Originally created for a Zoids RP Jade has grown from a simple pilot to a hard working experimental engineer of all thing tech, mech and science.



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Basics

Name: Jade Rhea


Age: 24


Species/Ethnicity: Human


Gender: Female


Occupation: Engineer and Mechanic


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  • Appearance

    Height: 2'9"


    Weight: 130


    Hair: Wavy auburn hair which reaches down to the middle of her back. Usually pulled back into a ponytail or braid.


    Eyes: Jade green eyes with flecks of gold and a dark blue edging around the pupil.


    Body: Athletic tall lanky build, slender shoulders, narrow waist, noticeable muscle build mostly along legs.


    Attire: Normal attire varies upon setting. Her preference tends to be loose fit clothing which is easy to move in. Normally her clothing is dusted with dirt or grim of some sort due to her constant state of working. The only exception to this tends to be her Piloting suit which is a black form fitted suit with faint blue hexagon marking.





    Prosthetics/Enhancements:


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    A constant through out every RP is is put into is the fact that her left arm is a cybernetic prosthetic. Originally her arm was replaced with a low tech prosthetic that she has tinkered with over the years and slowly made better and stronger.The arm has a sensory system for pressure, heat and pain to match that of a normal limb, only difference is she can turn these sense off. She has a noticeable increase in strength in the arm and it is resistant to heat and waterproof. There is an system to protect the arm against over load of energy and EMP. Last feature of the arm is a 4 inch sharpened hidden bladed used in emergencies.





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    A pendants two inches in diameter pendent given to her by her father when she was a child. The swirls with in the pendant will glow faintly. It never leaves her person and is normally tucked into her shirt.




 
Review for Jade Rhea

@Shura

Basics: :5/5:


Appearance: :5/5:


Skills: :5/5:


Personality: :5/5:


History: :4/5:


Overall: :4/5:


Additional Notes:


You have done very well with this character sheet. It is nice to see a female of power! You clearly seem to understand this character very well.


The reader is given just enough information to meet your character without giving too much away. Jade has a unique presence, a solid personality, and a super cool wardrobe. Your effort and time placed in creating these items is very visible. These definitely add to the creativity of your character.


Some of your character's behaviors are not explained in your characters history. We understand she has experienced some kind of trauma with explosions and her parents death. What we don't get to see is her relationship with her parents. Was she really close to them? did she appreciate them for sending her to high end education institutions? What was it like for her to have parents that were both in the army? How does that affect her personality. Is this part of the reason why she is so oblivious to romantic relationships? And is this why she is so attached to her own creations? Are these two things somehow connected?


It was a pleasure getting to meet your character. Shura. I hope to come across more from you in the future. ( :) )
 

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