Here's my poetry thread, eh? It's been up a while, so I hope it's enjoyable, though there's not yet much here. I'd like some criticism, so don't be afraid to post feedback - I'd be glad you did.
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Life's always hard, you take a chance,
Seclusion or a deathly dance,
Of truths and lies, of rise and falls
Of reasons to push through those walls
But I am still alive.
Life's never fun, you're on your own
Through sorrow and through times alone
When those you love are in deep pain
And hatred flows like springtime's rain
But somehow, you're alive.
Life's always near, who'ere you are
It never clears the wall so far
It hardly seems so far away,
Until you need someone to say
That somehow, you're alive.
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Life's always hard, you take a chance,
Seclusion or a deathly dance,
Of truths and lies, of rise and falls
Of reasons to push through those walls
But I am still alive.
Life's never fun, you're on your own
Through sorrow and through times alone
When those you love are in deep pain
And hatred flows like springtime's rain
But somehow, you're alive.
Life's always near, who'ere you are
It never clears the wall so far
It hardly seems so far away,
Until you need someone to say
That somehow, you're alive.
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