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How do I make poetry

First time ever writing a poem, please don't kill me for how bad it is.



The blade I hold so carefully.


An execution performed perfectly.


Similar to that of a dancers stance.


Every deflection against a glance.


A fight that lasts for eternity. 


(I'm going to regret this)
 
I'd be surprised if this was literally the first poem you ever wrote... It's decent though, so don't be too hard on yourself.
I would say however, that the rhythm between the words is much more important than rhyming. By that I mean when you read it allowed it should flow, reading it in my head this poem is decent; however, when it is read out loud it's somewhat clunky. I'd suggest reading your poem out loud often as you write it. 
 

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