ChoShadow
That One Fear In My Enemy's Eyes
Please do not post in this thread unless you have introduced yourself in the OOC Thread, linked above as 'OOC:'! It is a general courtesy I request of anyone and everyone who's interested in joining this RP!
The RP as a whole is ALMOST ready. I just need to clean some things up in other threads and make sure I covered everything I wanted to cover.
But you are free to introduce yourself and, after doing so, discuss your character with me and then submit it to this thread!
Thank you!
The RP as a whole is ALMOST ready. I just need to clean some things up in other threads and make sure I covered everything I wanted to cover.
But you are free to introduce yourself and, after doing so, discuss your character with me and then submit it to this thread!
Thank you!
Character Skeleton
The skeleton for your character will be as follows:
'*' - means this is optional
Name: (Be original please. No well-known names will be tolerated. Also, Saiyans DO NOT HAVE TO BE NAMED AFTER VEGETABLES!!!)
Picture: (Find an anime picture that's as close to your character's intended appearance as possible. You can describe any differences beneath the image.)
Age: (Minimum age is 21. For "Masters" of combat, minimum age is 40.)
Sex:
* Sexual Orientation:
Height:
Weight: (If you need help calculating this given your character's height and build, ask me.)
* Hair Color: (If the picture is exact, or close enough to it, this and eye color can be omitted.)
* Eye Color:
Body Type: (Endomorph, Ectomorph, Mesomorph)
Voice Example: (Find a voice example on Youtube or something to share so we know what your character sounds like.)
Starting Power Level: (Saiyans have a maximum allowed starting power level of 20,000 if they're not a "Master." If they're a "Master," then up to 30,000 will be allowed. Non-Saiyan characters are allowed any power level up to 25,000.)
Personality: (Please provide at minimum one full paragraph about who your character is, and please use no fewer than five sentences. You can and are encouraged to write more than this.)
* Training History: (Your character's training history regardless of where the training took place or from whom it was taught.)
* SPRC History: (Saiyans only, and this is optional, but encouraged.)
* Professional Biography: (A bio detailing only your character's professional life given whatever job/career you chose for them.)
Biography: (Your character's personal biography from birth until the present day. Please provide no fewer than three paragraphs which each contain no fewer than five full sentences. You can and are encouraged to write more than this.)
Age: 24
Sex: Female
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Height: 5' 9" (~175 cm)
Weight: 135 lbs (~61 kg)
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Body Type: Mesomorph
Voice Example: Soprano
Starting Power Level: 12,450
Nomiya's Theme
Sex: Female
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Height: 5' 9" (~175 cm)
Weight: 135 lbs (~61 kg)
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Body Type: Mesomorph
Voice Example: Soprano
Starting Power Level: 12,450
Nomiya's Theme
- Personal Techniques
- Personality
- SPRC History
- SPRC Accolades/Records
- Training History
- Personal Biography
- Family
* Ki Gradient - Concentrating her Ki tightly to her skin, she creates a barrier of energy which can harmlessly repel incoming Ki-based attacks so long as they're equal to or below her own power level.
- (This does not, however, protect her from the impact force of the attack which can still knock her backwards)
* Internal Carnage - Concentrating her Ki into her fingertips, she releases a controlled amount of it inside the body of her target. For as long as she retains physical contact, she can control the stream of Ki to assault their internal organs and nervous system, causing organ damage and temporary paralysis as the nerves become scorched and/or disrupted. As soon as physical contact is broken, the attack comes to an end and the Ki dissipates harmlessly within the opponent's body.
* TBN - She is currently in the process of creating a new technique which utilizes the heat properties of Ki to burn her enemies on contact. It is still in early development and largely theoretical. Whether she'll be able to truly make anything of it or not remains to be seen.- Summed in a single phrase, Nomiya is the living incarnation of "toughness."
Due to the nature of her training with her father from a young age, she has a remarkable ability to endure and shrug off attacks which could be potentially crippling for others who are of a similar size and power level. Whether it's a physical or Ki-based attack makes little difference so long as she has time to see it coming. Her ability to take physical hits often earns her praise from larger and more powerful Saiyans in both the field and during training. After one particular mission when she was 18, she took what was supposed to be a playful but forceful sucker punch to the gut from Sergeant Korral Borges, whose power level at the time was 17,860, and brushed it off with little fanfare earning a few "Ooh's" from the largely male crowd. Even doctors have commented on her toughness and how little she reacts to emergency surgery in the field when things go wrong and they don't have time for anesthetics. An example of this would be when Nomiya broke her leg in four places during a battle with a powerful alien life form on Planet Arc 02B-X1. The creature bit into her femur which snapped it in two places on top of the sheared flesh caused by its teeth, and its claws gripped and snapped her tibula and fibula to top it off. Her teammates managed to get the creature to let go and distracted it in time for the medics to see to her. But as they worked on her leg she kept her eyes on the battlefield with no visible reaction to what they were doing.
She's also mentally and emotionally tough, and she's the last person you will ever see cry in a public setting. In fact, nobody has. Ever. Even as a little girl she was taught not to cry by her parents. Her father's philosophy was that if you let your enemy see your tears, you'd already lost half the battle. As well, insults and verbal attacks couldn't faze her. She was taught early on to treat them as desperate attempts by weaklings to get under her skin, and thus today it's impossible to goad her into acting out of rage at insults. Her mother, while not as combat focused, also believed that if your friends and allies saw you cry, you'd let them down by losing your cool. She needed to be a rock for them. She needed to be strong and focused. No matter what happened and how much she wanted to cry, she couldn't cry, and nothing could make her cry. Nothing... At least not publicly. - Nomiya entered the Saiyan Planet Raid Corps (SPRC) when she was sixteen at the urging of her father. Following her enlistment, she was placed into Preparatory Training Camp to determine her Role and Value in the Group she was to be assigned to following her graduation. One of the major obstacles of her Training during this time was the reputation of her father. Having been an SPRC Group Commander before his retirement ten years ago, Nomiya had very large shoes to fill. Her father's power level at the time of his retirement was 32,650. His Value was 10. His combat record for Raids, as a Commander, was 328 successful Raids to 34 failed Raids which was, at the time, the second best record in the entire SPRC. Living up to her father's legacy proved difficult for Nomiya with a power level, at the time, of only 8,400. The average power level of her peers was 10,000, making combat training particularly challenging. Were it not for her physical toughness and tenacity, she'd likely have been beaten to a pulp long before graduation with the way she was treated. It was not uncommon to see the males in her Training Group attempting to sexually harass her due to her large chest and womanly figure, groping and grabbing whenever they could hoping to start a fight and get her thrown out.
But at the same time, it was her mental toughness which saw her survive this harassment and ill treatment and continue through the Camp.
A gift Nomiya received from her mother was her intelligence and her strong memory. Tests came easy to Nomiya, as well as the memorization of the SPRC Laws, guidelines, tenets, and creed. Nomiya was, intellectually, at the top of her Camp's rankings despite her "average" combat rating. Due to her physical toughness not translating yet into raw power, Nomiya's combat abilities compared to her peers were indeed average at best. Her Combat Rating was, for a long time, a 5 out of 10.
During the latter stages of Preparatory Training Camp, Nomiya was tested in a way she'd never expected by her peers. Due to her not backing down from the way she was treated, never being goaded into lashing out, and being at the top of the test rankings, she was subjected to an attempted rape by seven of her male peers. The ring leader was named Veran Nous, son of another highly respected former Commander, and Nomiya's one true rival in the Camp as far as familial legacies were concerned. Having felt threatened by Nomiya's success and continued resilience against the pressure he and the others put on her, Veran orchestrated the attempted rape as a final means of trying to force her to drop out. To escape the attempted assault, Nomiya was forced to utilize her true combat style. By targeting nerve points and vital regions with pinpoint accuracy, she managed to protect herself from Veran whom she paralyzed from the waist down with a strike to his spinal chord just above his tail. One of the Camp Supervisors happened upon the scene having detected Nomiya's power increase on his Scouter, and upon his arrival Nomiya immediately reported what had just happened which resulted in Veran being dishonorably discharged from Camp along with all who followed him in the attack.
Veran's family was disgraced by their son's defeat at Nomiya's hands, as well as his being forced out Camp, and thus now have a grudge against Nomiya's family.
Following Veran's ejection from Camp, Nomiya's progress remained stable until graduation. Her final Role was determined to be Vanguard, and her final Value after Training was estimated to be a 6 which was quite a respectable prediction. She graduated with high honors and was specifically recognized by her Camp Manager during the final Graduation Ceremonial Speech for having survived the attempted orchestration of a rape by Veran and company, and for continuing to push through the pressure he and others had pressed against her to make it to where she was today. Despite her average Combat Rating, he proudly declared her one of the finest students of the Corps he had ever seen which brought great pride to her family.
Following the Graduation Ceremony, she was the first in her Camp's Draft to be selected to the SPRC. She was selected by SPRC Group #1,052, "Graceful Storm," and upon reviewing her file and observing combat training footage her Commander, Korvaiis Dresden, gave her a Value of 8. For a rookie fresh out of Camp, this was incredibly rare and shocked many of her peers. Particularly those who had been putting pressure on her and believed her to be just another "average" fighter. Following her selection, she spent a brief period of time at home with her family to celebrate her graduation and her selection to Graceful Storm. The day prior to her first official day of service as part of Graceful Storm, she was delivered her new outfit (the one she's wearing in her Super Saiyan image) and a Scouter with a light blue visor. Now fully equipped and ready for her first day of service, Nomiya flew to Graceful Storm's headquarters and was greeted by her new soon-to-be family with open arms and celebration. - Since joining the SPRC at age 17 following graduation from Preparatory Training Camp, and being selected first in her Camp's Draft, Nomiya has spend the last 7 years accumulating a series of Accolades and Records in her service to Graceful Storm.
Medals
('***' means that Nomiya currently holds the record for this accomplishment in Saiyan Society for Soldiers with fewer than 10 years of service, and '**' means she's tied for the current record and expected to break it.)
*** 17 Brave Heart Medals - Bestowed upon Saiyans who fearlessly engage more powerful opponents on their own and survive to see victory (previous recored was 6)
*** 9 Sacred Shield Medals - Bestowed upon Saiyans who shield their Commanding Officers from harm and survive the effort (previous record was 4)
** 5 Broken Scouter Medals - Bestowed upon Saiyans who participated in and survived encounters with enemies whose power levels shattered Saiyan Scouters
* 5 Scarred Fist Medals - Bestowed upon Saiyans who suffer and survive grievous injuries in the field
* 3 Falling Star Medals - Bestowed upon Saiyans who are confirmed to have assisted with and survived missions to repel falling meteors on allied worlds
* 4 Golden Hand Medals - Bestowed upon Saiyans who participated in greatly lucrative Raids which turned a high profit
* 2 Fiery Hail Medals - Bestowed upon Saiyans who survive meteor showers or large solitary meteor strikes during Raids
Accolades
('***' means that Nomiya currently is the only Soldier in her Group to hold this accolade, and '**' means she's among a select few who hold the accolade.)
*** Combative Artist - In recognition of her creative and versatile record of victory against powerful enemies
*** Decorated Defender - In recognition of her breaking the record for Sacred Shield Medals
*** Innovator - For Nomiya's creation of her technique Internal Carnage which implants Ki within the body of an enemy to cause internal damage
** Prime Vanguard - In recognition of Nomiya's unbridled tenacity in combat as a member of the Vanguard
** Rescuer - In recognition of Nomiya's numerous rescues of her comrades in dangerous situations
* Calm Mind - In recognition of Nomiya's calm and collected demeanor during service at all times
* Undaunted - In recognition of Nomiya's unflinching resolve against vastly superior enemies
* Survivor - In recognition of Nomiya's survival in numerous dangerous situations - Nomiya's training began at the tender age of 2 1/2 after she developed basic hand-eye coordination skills that were, by her father's standards, deemed "passable." She first learned the basics of how to hold a stance, punch, kick, and evasive stepping. Due to long training days with her father, lasting anywhere from 8-14 hours a day, she had mastered the basics her father had taught her by age five. At said time, her father changed focus to dedicating only 4 hours to practicing her basics and the remaining 4-10 hours too enduring harsh combat. He was a Commander of an SPRC Group, and he was a Tank. He wanted her to be a Tank as well, and to be a Tank required a lot of endurance and durability. The latter especially. If you couldn't take the hits to protect your team or distract the strongest enemies, you didn't deserve your role.
With her father's power level of, at the time, 30,440, and still not at his Genetic Limit, he had to hold back considerably against Nomiya who's power level at age five was only 118. But the apple didn't fall far from the tree, and within six months Nomiya had learned how to take the hits her father gave and come back with a counter attack. Soon after, at age six, her power level had jumped considerably thanks to her father's harsh training regimen to 894. With a power almost at 1,000 her father decided it was time to up the ante and began to introduce weapons to the regimen. It started simply with knives. Blunted and rounded at the edges so as not to cut for real, but with red paint along the "blade" so if she got cut she'd know. Nomiya struggled against this weapon's training for two years before reaching a level her father deemed "proficient." From there, now at age eight, her father returned to his original methods of training her to be a Tank. Nomiya continued on her own to train in basics and against weapons until she was ten years old, at which time her father began to groom her for the SPRC Preparatory Training Camp.
During the next six years her father taught her all about the Corps from his experience as a Commander. How they lived. What they did. Why they did it. Who many of the Saiyan Race's greatest and most reliable clients were. And about what to expect in the tests and combat training. The one thing he didn't prepare her for was what happened during her time as a student with Veran and his friends. He hadn't anticipated that the son of another well-respected Commander would go to such lengths against his little girl. He was furious when he found out, and it was only when Nomiya revealed she'd used what he taught her to protect herself and have him dishonorably discharged that he was able to calm down and let it all go. But Veran's family still received a harsh letter from him threatening that if he ever saw Veran he would beat him bloody as payment for what he tried to do to Nomiya.
After entering the SPRC's Preparatory Training Camp, she resumed training on her own however and whenever she could. And today she maintains a near 10-14 hour regimen between missions on a daily basis. To say she is the toughest female Saiyan in the Graceful Storm Group is no longer an opinion. It's a fact. - Nomiya was born twenty four years ago. Her father, Maelloro, was a newly appointed Commander in SPRC Group #944, "Diamond Brawlers." Her mother, Calea, was a Medic in said Group, and had fallen in love with her Commander after his first two years in said capacity. The two of them married and Nomiya was officially conceived following a particularly grueling mission which saw the Group lose over 40 members to an atrociously powerful and massive alien insectoid creature. In a night of passion born of adrenaline and sorrow, Nomiya's conception was followed by an accident during a mission gone wrong which saw Calea honorably discharged from service due to injury which resulted in the amputation of her left arm. However, this meant Calea was free to stay at home and raise Nomiya following her birth. And care for her she did. Despite her injury, Calea was the perfect mother until her father managed to adjust his time with the Group and home to remain for long periods and train Nomiya.
Later in life, age sixteen, she joined the SPRC Preparatory Training Camp in the hopes of joining the Corps. Following a rather harrowing incident with one of the other students and his cohorts, she graduated from Camp and was picked first in her Camp's Draft for the Corps. Immediately following her induction into the Group, and at her mother's urging, Nomiya took to studying the Saiyan's biology at every level. Their digestive system. Their nervous system. Their major arteries and vein map. Their muscular distribution. Their Ki Pathways. Their major organs. Everything. While she wasn't a Medic and she wasn't the Tank her father hoped she would be, she became a well-rounded combatant despite her modest power level, at this time, of 9,635.
When she was twenty years old Nomiya, for the first time, interacted with a small Saiyan child during some down time on the Saiyan's Home World of Valkyom. The encounter changed Nomiya at a fundamental level and made her long for a child of her own. And later that same year she got her wish during a romantic encounter with one of the other Soldiers in her Group. Following a mission gone wrong, stress and anxiety ran high throughout Graceful Storm. Nomiya, having taken a liking to this particular Soldier, and knowing of his liking of her, went to his quarters in the dead of night to find him still awake and grieving over the loss of several of his friends. Nomiya initially sought only to comfort him, but one thing led to another and the following morning Nomiya knew she'd gone too far. Her daughter, Miki, was born nine months later shortly after her twenty first birthday.
The Soldier she conceived Miki with refused to be a father, but this didn't bother Nomiya. In fact, she felt relieved that he wouldn't involve himself in her daughter's life. Nomiya was ready to raise her by herself, and so she has for the last three years. Miki is currently happy and healthy, and remains glued to her loving mother at all times. Contrary to how Nomiya was raised, she chooses instead to raise little Miki with love and urges her curiosity and desire to learn about the worlds that she sees as a child of the Graceful Storm. She keeps a careful watch on Miki, never letting her stray far, and keeping her Scouter active at all times to make sure nothing is around that could threaten her safety. If you asked her ten years ago if she thought she'd be a mother by this time of her life, she'd have said you were crazy. But today she wouldn't have it any other way.
Today Miki is almost a little celebrity within Graceful Storm, being known and beloved by most everyone for her curiosity, her lack of a filter on what she says, and her joyful demeanor which sees her smiling at all hours of the day. - Daughter - Miki, age 3. Always happy and smiling, and very attached to her mother and many of her extended family within Graceful Storm.
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