Charan Thorne

[CactusJuice]

[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]A woman slowly approaches you with a laptop. She takes a seat in front of you and looks you square in the eyes. A smile is on her face as she opens it up and says,"[/SIZE][SIZE=13.333333333333332px]I'm just going to ask you a couple of questions. Make sure you answer truthfully.[/SIZE][SIZE=13.333333333333332px]"[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Let me get a good look at you.:[/SIZE]

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[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]What's your name?:[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Charan Thorne, mam.[/SIZE][SIZE=13.333333333333332px] [/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]How old are you?:[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Seventeen[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Are you male or female?:[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Charan looked down. “Well, I didn’t fail biology, so I’m pretty sure I’m male.”[/SIZE][SIZE=13.333333333333332px] [/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Did you come here willingly? Or did your parents let you go?:[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Who [/SIZE][SIZE=13.333333333333332px]wouldn’t[/SIZE][SIZE=13.333333333333332px] come here willingly? We’re getting superpowers![/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Can you recite your experiment number?:[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Charan sings the James Bond theme.. “Double O Seven.” [/SIZE][SIZE=13.333333333333332px] [/SIZE][SIZE=13.333333333333332px]He laughed.[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]How would you describe yourself?:[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]“Confident, outgoing, and ready to help!”[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]What was life like before you came here?:[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]His smile faded. “Well, after my parents died, I was living in an orphanage. I started reading a lot of comics and manga.They inspire me!”[/SIZE][SIZE=13.333333333333332px] [/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Is there anything that upsets you?:[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]“Criminals, other mean people, and ,well, no one likes a downer![/SIZE][SIZE=13.333333333333332px]”[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]What about something that brightens up your day?:[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]“I love helping people, and music, and manga, and comics, and anime, and sunshine, and animals, and-” the list goes on for a while.[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Let me see what the lab has prepped for you experiment number 007: Super Hare *They made him a human-hare hybrid. This made his legs extremely strong, and they’re more durable. He can reach a speed of about 20 mph when jumping. He can jump about 3 times his height horizontally, and about 1.5 times it vertically. They also gave him the instincts of a rabbit. This makes him very good at evading pursuers, but it also completely changed his personality. Bright light, noises, pretty much everything, scares him, and his instincts very heavily lean towards the flight in a flight or fight scenario.His great sense of smell and hearing don’t help this.  Also, if he doesn’t land with his feet when he jumps, he will sustain damage.*[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]“Oo, does that mean I get hair manipulation powers? Will I be able to  make my hair grow? Will I be able to make OTHER people’s hair grow?” He pictured making a girl grow a curly mustache, and he chuckled.[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Anything else I should really know about or care about?: [/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]He shook his head excitedly. “Nope, just that I’m willing to endure anything if it makes me a superhero. Let’s get started right away!”[/SIZE][SIZE=13.333333333333332px] He looked like he was actuallyt looking foward to this.[/SIZE]


[SIZE=13.333333333333332px]Once all the questions were answered, the woman stood up from her seat and thanked you before leaving you with two guards who were more than happy to escort you back to your section.[/SIZE]


Welcome home

 

[CactusJuice]

@Isuneso what do you need me to fix?  xD

 

[Isune]

I'd lower how high and far he can jump. I mean think about it. Let's pretend his height is five foot. Multiply that by three and the dude can jump 15 feet in the air. And 40 mph seems a bit fast. I couldn't hit him with a broom even if I tried (it also doesn't help I imagine him having a goofy run where his legs are flailing about while from the waist up he looks normal. And for him to jump six times his height horizontally, I just imagine him soaring across the air for a little while xD . Other than that, the sheet looks really good. I really like how he draws inspiration from manga and comic books.

 

[CactusJuice]

I'd lower how high and far he can jump. I mean think about it. Let's pretend his height is five foot. Multiply that by three and the dude can jump 15 feet in the air. And 40 mph seems a bit fast. I couldn't hit him with a broom even if I tried (it also doesn't help I imagine him having a goofy run where his legs are flailing about while from the waist up he looks normal. And for him to jump six times his height horizontally, I just imagine him soaring across the air for a little while xD . Other than that, the sheet looks really good. I really like how he draws inspiration from manga and comic books.

Yeah, that's no joke just how crazy hares are at jumping, and the faster ones can go like 45 mph.  xD  but I was looked at few more chars (like the cheetah hybrid who only runs like 30 mph), and I realize my char was op in comparison, so I literally just halved everything.  xD  is that good?

 

[Isune]

Much better. This character is ACCEPTED!!!!!!!!