Belluam Sansuis [ Approved ]

MsPolite

The Ass Kicking Beast woman
Character Sheet


Member Form


What do you expect from RP's?:

To Have fun, create stories, and weave attachments to great characters then sever them.
What do you expect from THIS RP?:

To Create an Epic, with love, loss, friendships and betrayal.

What kind of Experience do you have in RPing? :

All kinds, Good ones, Bad ones. A lot of failed ones.

What genres of RP do you like?:

I LOVE high fantasy and future fantasy
What times are you available?:

Everyday
How long on average are you on?:

about a hour, but I check up once every so often.
How many posts a week do you think you can make?:

7

Are you willing to contribute in World building? If so, in what way? :
Would you be willing to play a role already setup? :

Only if they are female

Would you be willing to play an Antagonist? :

YES, in fact it would be preferred

Would you be willing to GM certain events? :

Of course


General Traits


Character Picture:56d9de42bc85e3b4866a8047b2f66e20.jpg


Character Role: Main,


Character Name: Belluam Sansuis


Meaning of Name: War Blood


Alias: Dame of the Flames


Gender: Female


Race: Human


Age: 38



Appearance


Height: 5'11


Weight: 200 LB


Hair: Black with a bit of red


Eyes: Pitch Black


Body Marks: A lot of Scars from years of war, two prominent ones on her face, over her left eye and her right cheek



Biography


Birth Place: Kingdoms: Welwyn


Date of Birth: Ferra 2, 960 C.Y.A.D


Nationality: Northerner


Personality: Brash and Arrogant, Belluam is always eager to go into battle, and relishes war. She has a rage fueled sadism to all who oppose her and her goals. But to her friends she is a hard-ass, strict and blunt, in order to always keep them sharp and ready. To children she has a soft spot and a weakness she loathes as her motherly instincts can never allow her to discard children in need. Belluam works hard and parties harder, always looking for a fight or get blinding drunk.


2 Positive Traits: Strong, Motherly


2 Negative Traits: Bloodthirsty, Wrathful


Weaknesses: Reminder of her failures, Swimming, Ducks


History: Belluam was born to a farmers family, who weren't poor nor rich. She eventually met a mercenary who was traveling through her village. It was then that she fell in love with the man and despite her father objecting to any contact with the rouge she ran away with him. It was then she got the taste of a mercenary life and traveled with her beloved. Eventually Her husband was wounded and the eventually settled down and got married and had three kids, two sons and a daughter. They lived on a farm far away from towns and people living a happy life. But their home was attacked by marauders while they were tending the fields. Her Husband and sons were mutilated, and her daughter and her where "mistreated" to say the least. The bandit took her daughter left Belluam for dead. She was later found by a patrols and taken to be healed. It was then at the age of 23 that she set out with her sword, husbands axe and a great vengeance in her heart to find those responsible and Kill them all. She searched for 5 years, when she found one of them with her daughter living as townsfolk, some how married and living together. With a rage that would rival the Demons of old, she slew the man. Her daughter unable to recognize her mother and struck Belluam, her mother almost killing her, before Belluam could tell her the truth. Overwhelmed with greif and unwilling to come to terms with it all Belluams committed suicide. To this day Belluam travels the world trying to forget by drinking or being blind with bloodlust.


Occupation: Mercenary/ Handy-man


Life Skills: Cooking, Hunting, Armor and weapon repair, House repair.



Material Possessions


Clothing and Attire: One Scarlet Dress she keeps. [on the picture} Plate armor, leather armor, Gambeson, pearl wedding ring. Workers clothes, apron. Scarf.


Personal Items: A wooded figure of a family, Her Magical Volcanic Sword and Axe



Combat Section


Character Class:


The Character Class Helps to determine the affinity your character has to certain Elements. It also shows what the Types of artes you can use.


The Character Class' are as follows, Please choose one and delete the rest:


Combateer:


Description: Combateers concentrate on close range combat, and are masters of attack and defense. They are self reliant always having others depend on them rather than vice versa. While they excel both in group and single combat, when engaging large numbers it may take some time to deal with all opponents.


Elements Affinity: Fire / Earth / Ice / Steel


Types of Artes: ATK / DEF / EHM / SPT


Base Stats: HP: 6 / SE: 15 / CCA: 3 / ATK: 1 / DEF: 1/ EHM: 1 / SPT: 1


Special Ability: Mother's Touch: Can calm a child down in times in great stress


Item Ability: Firestarter: Able to use her weapons to start fires, And able to use her axe or sword to more easily cut through objects (within reason) and melt certain objects with low melting point.


Runes Artes:


Arte level 1


Name of Arte: Mothers Discipline


Type: EHM


Description: adds +1 to lowest ATK roll, if a two 6's are rolled, Belluam's weapons melts through any steel, iron, or ice. Lasts for 5 posts


Elemental: Fire


Price: 5 Token points


Cost: 6 SE


Arte level 2


Name of Arte: Mothers Love


Type: DEF


Description: Armor covers her completely and conjures a helmet


Elemental: Steel


Price: 10 Token points


Cost: 12 SE


Arte level 3


Name of Arte: Mothers Hand


Type: ATK


Description: A wave of fire shoots from her weapons when swung.


Elemental: Fire


Price: 15 Token points


Cost: 18 SE


Arte level 4


Name of Arte: Mothers Eye


Type: ATK


Description: Conjures four javelins and throws them 25m


Elemental: Fire


Price: 20 Token points


Cost: 24 SE


Arte level 5


Name of Arte: Mothers Rage


Type: ATK


Description: Fire spews from every orifice of her body and armor, her hair ignites into a blaze and her weapons drips lava.


Elemental: Fire


Price: 25 Token points


Cost: 30 SE
 
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Hi there!


please let me know when you are ready for review. The artes part can be tricky but I will try to balance them out and keep as much of your creativity as possible. 
 
Your cs is conditionally approved! You may star posting in IC. Full approval will occur when the personal arte list is completed. Until then participation in plot combat is limited. However as we have just started a new story arc there currently is no battle. 
 
@MsPolite I will quote your post and any comments, questions or recommendations will be written inside in BOLD And RED type. Let's get started

Character Sheet


Member Form


What do you expect from RP's?:


To Have fun, create stories, and weave attachments to great characters then sever them.
What do you expect from THIS RP?:


To Create an Epic, with love, loss, friendships and betrayal.


What kind of Experience do you have in RPing? :


All kinds, Good ones, Bad ones. A lot of failed ones.


What genres of RP do you like?:


I LOVE high fantasy and future fantasy
What times are you available?:


Everyday
How long on average are you on?:


about a hour, but I check up once every so often.
How many posts a week do you think you can make?:


7


Are you willing to contribute in World building? If so, in what way? :
Would you be willing to play a role already setup?  :


Only if they are female


Would you be willing to play an Antagonist? :


YES, in fact it would be preferred


Would you be willing to GM certain events?  :


Of course


General Traits


Character Picture:View attachment 183426


Character Role: Main,


Character Name: Belluam Sansuis


Meaning of Name: War Blood


I do like how the actual name carries that meaning. I do hope however that you realize it does not have to. You can have a name like JOHN and have it mean, Destroyers of Worlds for all we care. Discovering name meanings should be fun though!


Alias: Dame of the Flames


Gender: Female


Race: Human


Age: 38



Appearance


Height: 5'11


Weight: 200 LB


Hair: Black with a bit of red


Eyes: Pitch Black


Body Marks: A lot of Scars from years of war, two prominent ones on her face, over her left eye and her right cheek



Biography


Birth Place: Kingdoms: Welwyn


Date of Birth: Ferra 2, 960 C.Y.A.D


Nationality: Northerner


Personality: Brash and Arrogant, Belluam is always eager to go into battle, and relishes war. She has a rage fueled sadism to all who oppose her and her goals. But to her friends she is a hard-ass, strict and blunt, in order to always keep them sharp and ready. To children she has a soft spot and a weakness she loathes as her motherly instincts can never allow her to discard children in need. Belluam works hard and parties harder, always looking for a fight or get blinding drunk.


2 Positive Traits: Strong, Motherly


2 Negative Traits: Bloodthirsty, Wrathful


Weaknesses: Reminder of her failures, Swimming, Ducks


History: Belluam was born to a farmers family, who weren't poor nor rich. She eventually met a mercenary who was traveling through her village. It was then that she fell in love with the man and despite her father objecting to any contact with the rouge she ran away with him. It was then she got the taste of a mercenary life and traveled with her beloved. Eventually Her husband was wounded and the eventually settled down and got married and had three kids, two sons and a daughter. They lived on a farm far away from towns and people living a happy life. But their home was attacked by marauders while they were tending the fields. Her Husband and sons were mutilated, and her daughter and her where "mistreated" to say the least. The bandit took her daughter left Belluam for dead. She was later found by a patrols and taken to be healed. It was then at the age of 23 that she set out with her sword, husbands axe and a great vengeance in her heart to find those responsible and Kill them all. She searched for 5 years, when she found one of them with her daughter living as townsfolk, some how married and living together. With a rage that would rival the Demons of old, she slew the man. Her daughter unable to recognize her mother and struck Belluam, her mother almost killing her, before Belluam could tell her the truth. Overwhelmed with greif and unwilling to come to terms with it all Belluams committed suicide. To this day Belluam travels the world trying to forget by drinking or being blind with bloodlust.


Very nice story. Emotionally engaging and rather different from what I have seen in this and previous incarnations of this RP. I think if the character were a man, I would say its a touching story, but having it told from the perspective of the mother/wife is fresh add to that a flair of vendeta


Occupation: Mercenary/ Handy-man


Life Skills: Cooking, Hunting, Armor and weapon repair, House repair.



Material Possessions


Clothing and Attire: One Scarlet Dress she keeps. [on the picture} Plate armor, leather armor, Gambeson, pearl wedding ring. Workers clothes, apron. Scarf.


Personal Items: A wooded figure of a family, Her Magical Volcanic Sword and Axe 





Combat Section


Character Class:


The Character Class Helps to determine the affinity your character has to certain Elements. It also shows what the Types of artes you can use.


The Character Class' are as follows, Please choose one and delete the rest:


Combateer:


Description: Combateers concentrate on close range combat, and are masters of attack and defense. They are self reliant always having others depend on them rather than vice versa. While they excel both in group and single combat, when engaging large numbers it may take some time to deal with all opponents.


Elements Affinity: Fire / Earth / Ice / Steel


Types of Artes:  ATK / DEF / EHM / SPT


Base Stats: HP: 6 / SE: 15 / CCA: 3 / ATK: 1 / DEF: 1 / EHM: 1 / SPT: 1


Special Ability: Firestarter: Able to use her weapons to start fires,  And able to use her axe or sword to more easily cut through objects (within reason) and melt certain objects with low melting point.


Special Abilities often come from the character itself rather than a weapon or an item.


Runes Artes:


Arte level 1


Name of Arte: Mothers Discipline


Type: EHM


Description: adds +1 to lowest ATK roll, if a two 6's are rolled, Belluam's weapons melts through any steel, iron, or ice.


Elemental: Fire


Price: 5 Token points


Cost: 6 SE


We should add a duration or limit. I would suggest the enhancement lasts 5 of your posts. You would then need to post in Battle conditions for 5 posts.


Arte level 2


Name of Arte: Mothers Love


Type: Steel


Description: Armor covers her completely and conjures a helmet


Elemental: Steel


Price: 10 Token points


Cost: 12 SE


I just realized all the artes had Mother attached to them haha. Cool Arte, although the Type seems to be a Typo haha, but I would think this is a DEF arte.


Arte level 3


Name of Arte: Mothers Hand


Type: ATK


Description: A wave of fire shoots from her weapons when swung. range is 15m. 


Elemental: Fire


Price: 15 Token points


Cost: 18 SE


Just to let you know, Range does not have to be set. There is a Support Tech that increases the range as you wish. HERE V find it under Range




Arte level 4


Name of Arte: Mothers Eye


Type: ATK


Description: Conjures three javelins and throws them 25m


Elemental: Fire


Price: 20 Token points


Cost: 24 SE


We should make it 4 Javelins. Again, the range is optional


Arte level 5


Name of Arte: Mothers Rage


Type: ATK


Description: Fire spews from every orifice of her body and armor, her hair ignites into a blaze and her weapons drips lava. 


Elemental: Fire


Price: 25 Token points


Cost: 30 SE


This sounds scary. Just to make it clear, that ATK artes last for one turn



If you have any concerns, please address them here for me to help you with.
 
And able to use her axe or sword to more easily cut through objects (within reason) and melt certain objects with low melting point.

Maybe remove this from your Special Ability cause you can have this as an item ability instead. Otherwise after you change that


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