Aina Hasekura/Hasekura Aina

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Personal Information


Name: (First) Aina, (Last) Hasekura


Age:16 


Sex:Female


Date of Birth:1/1


Grade Level:Second


Appearance: 

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Personality:

A quiet, and reserved girl, but takes insults really badly. She really enjoys spending time with her family, and treasures every moment. She is also a bit into gaming, and gets excited in growing greenery. She likes to support people to the best of her ability, and usual often helps out an person that is struggling with something. However she can easily be depressed, and spends her time alone staring into the skies. She has a soft spot for cute animals, and likes to take care of babies of any sort. She is also somewhat motivational able to get the strength to do things from her family, and friend's words. She does have a minor phobia of the dark, but this is somewhat overcome if it is in an serious situation. 



Combat Information[/b]


Main Arcana:Hermit


Compatible Arcana:Strength, Hanged Man


HP/SP:


HP:135


SP:55


Mask:Asian Fox mask.


Weapon Type:Strike/Staves 


Equipment:

  • Weapon:Brush Pole A pole usually combined with brooms. Deals 20 Strike Damage to a single foe.
  • Armor:Turtleneck - A regular turtleneck shirt
  • Accessories - Music box necklace - A literal box hanging on a necklace
  • Clothes:Default Clothes



Initial Persona


Name:Tokoyo


Arcana:Hermit 


Origin:Folktales (I got it from Japanese Folktales from Wikipedia) 


Appearance:

Tokoyo.png

Skills:

Bash


Cost: 5% of HP = 7 HP


Effect: Deals 40 Strike damage to 1 enemy.


Rakukaja


Cost:12 SP


Effect:Increases 1 ally's Defense for 3 turns. Damage Dealt to Ally is decreased by 25%


Magna


Cost:4


Effect: Deals 37 Earth damage to 1 enemy


Dia


Cost:3


Effect: Restores 36 HP to 1 ally

Resistances:

  • Slash:--
  • Strike:Str
  • Pierce:--
  • Fire:Weak
  • Water:--
  • Ice:--
  • Electric:--
  • Earth:Str
  • Wind:--
  • Nuclear:--
  • Gravity--
  • Light:--
  • Dark:Weak
 
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1. You haven't included the actual weapon type your character uses. You included only the damage type. Since she's using a brush pole, you can maybe use spears or staves?


2. You'll have to change the Persona because Hestia is a goddess/deity figure. The Persona has to be based on a character in stories, legends, fairy tales, poems, romanticized historical figures, etc. Basically, no deity figures or recognizable characters in any religion.


3. On Bash, depending if your character is more Physical base, I recommend a damage of 42-45. If your character is more Magic base, the damage should be 30-35. Also, Bash should only cost 5% of HP.


4. On Rakukaja, instead of "Minus 1 to enemy roll", replace it with "Damage dealt to ally is decreased by 25%."


5. Same damage recommendations as Bash depending on whether she's more physical or magic based.


6. Dia should heal 40-45 if magic oriented. 33-38 if physical oriented.
 
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Alright, just a few more additions and you're golden.


1. Bash should state: "Deals 35 Strike damage to 1 enemy."


2. Agi: "Deals 44 Fire damage to 1 enemy."


3. Dia: "Restores 43 HP to 1 ally."
 

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