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Ah I see. Well if you're dyslectic that explains a lot of the errors. And it's only natural. I have no experience with dyslexia however, so I don't know how to best go about writing, or managing propper grammar with it.

That's no problem mate. But I think maybe you didn't edit the text yourself before you put it here, which you really should do every time you write something. I guess that's what you said about rushing the process.

There are just too many grammar errors to go through in one sitting. I added comments on the first few lines, and these mistakes continue throughout the text. If you take a look at the comments I added and then go through the entire text and edit the reoccurring instances of those errors, I can...

I sent an editing request.

I'll take a look at it and give you pointers, but you have to enable commenting in google docs so I can leave spelling corrections and advice.

Yo dude look there is the bread-man with a cop Should have cooled down on the bread, but bread-man can't stop Ye you're right let's get closer, we can easily eavesdrop If we get close enough perhaps the bread we can swap For something far less valuable, a decoy, a prop And then we'll head on...

Great read! I feel very strongly with this text. Some of the dutch was a little annoying. But good text!

This was something I had laying around "You never actually believe what you read, do you?" The sitting man asked. George had noticed him when entering because the man had been stretching his legs, far into his path. But George didn't mind having to raise his feet once in a while and went...

I like the writing, it's got a good pace to it. I felt immediately intrigued by the characters and what was going on around them. There are though many grammatical inconsistencies and errors in the text. You should correct those.

Looks fucking sweet. Have you checked out the character art commission/request thread? I mean with great ability comes great responsibility. Also, I always want to point out something I like in particular when art is posted. But I constantly realize I don't know shit about art, all I know is...

-Moved to Creativity- I have been writing on and off for about four years, but I have never actually been the storyteller of a roleplay before 2020 was started on this site maybe six months ago. What I had to slowly learn was the importance of finding a balance between planning ahead and...

Hmm... I'm not sure exactly which character is which, or what the fuck is going on. But I'm intrigued, that's for sure. I'll follow this! :D EDIT: I have a feeling, I'm not suppose to understand what's going on.

The best cure for insomnia is to not sleep.

I thought it was just beautiful and I got to say, Grey, you're being admirably productive right now.

Scared, like a mothefukah!

Very beautiful. A great read.

As Erwin was fighting his way back to where he had come from, he started to feel uneasy and stopped where the one tunnel split. What was this really about? Was this woman crazy, or perfectly sane? Was she in trouble, or was he in trouble? But most of all he asked himself, does she know? He was...

With haste he left the square behind him and decended into the subway station's hollow tunnels, at least he found them hollow. The general public seemed to enjoy the, to him obvious, propaganda. Disguised as the art installation "The Unsung", logo's and portraits of founders of successful...

A normal citizen of this earth might find an event like this one to be strange, troubling or even disturbing. But not this citizen. Erwin had during more years than most had lived, dealt with oddities just like her. The mysterious potential client, actually seemed like the somewhat pleasant kind...