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  1. Fitzgerald Compson

    Story My novel that I gave up on, feel free to criticise it

    So I gave up on this novel because of how undisputedly horrible it is. Enjoy I guess: Black And White Set 1816. Texas Chapter One: The New House His eyes could barely stay awake. Pain was his legs. Aching was his chest. And broken was his brain. He could scarcely walk without stumbling. And...
  2. Fitzgerald Compson

    Story Short story that I would like some criticism on

    Thank you very much!
  3. Fitzgerald Compson

    Story Short story that I would like some criticism on

    The serial killer thing I’m not so sure of, I’m sure they had a word for a mass murderer though Yeah the suddenly bit always bugged me as well, but I carried on either way Thank you so much! May you have a wonderful day!
  4. Fitzgerald Compson

    Story Short story that I would like some criticism on

    Thank you very much! Ill be sure to dwell on these when I continue writing, and please, do continue,
  5. Fitzgerald Compson

    Story Short story that I would like some criticism on

    The Ree. By Alex Sheffield Set 1824 The Hunter shuffled through the forest. His feet squelching in the mud. The leaves thwacked across his masked face while the wind howled its angered rage across the scavenged forest. His animal fur as clothing was wet and damp, his hand made snake pants...
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