I see what you are trying to do, and it's a good idea, but it's a little too similar to Fia. You basically copy pasted what I wrote and changed the name.
For a CS, I use the longer writing (from personality and history) to see how people write as well.
While it would make sense for Epiphy to...
What jayus said is correct, but a very small handful of other gijinka would have been to the mianland as well. For example, Taima was raised among humans, she would at least be familiar with the technology. There would also be a few other more human looking gijinka (like May) who were sent to...
They would be able to make their own swords. There are blacksmiths in the village. Swords wouldn't be too common since most gijinka would use their own power, but some may use a weapon as a way to channel their power.
So there would be no area between the two tribes. They have been trying to get the upper hand for generations, so the teritories are right against each other. The two tribes' territories take up most of the island.
As for other, smaller villages. They would be seperated from the main villages...
I thought Diana and Fiero would be a cute couple to be honest.
Alik is going to have a crush he doesn't even realise is a crush because he's a dense brick XD Also I like the drama
@eeveefarmer87 Sorry, I didn't see your more recent post before I posted. Alik is not the alpha, Emrik is. Alik is the younger brother so he was never in that position.
@AI10100 I'll also edit it with fiero in mind