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Overall the character is a decent concept but a bit overdone. The entire thing feels slightly washed out from just reading the character bio but then again it really comes off as how you play it in game. In no way is this not passable as a character, I just feel she needs a new layer of skin to...

Hmm.. Well, to begin. I have an issue with the dere system of character design to start with. It's a system designed to focus on situation and not character. By choosing that path, you effectively toss the character into a barrel of other player characters where I could put my hand in and draw...

DeusexAlice befriended her in a weird way. Using her as bait to lure a shark in to kill it.

Which is funny because that kinda happened?

Stronger is very subjective term. The best way to do it is to remove higher functions through repeated deaths to get her in a feral state and then lock her in a cage. Like kill her by drowning enough till she gets gills then keep her in a desert cage with just enough water to not die. So I guess...

(>u>)But would you survive on an island with crazy hormonal teen writers with~

-writing so much unnecessary words for nothing- While I think the point you are trying to make has some validity to it, I don't think writing to develop a character is in any way unnecessary. I think what it boils down to is the type of roleplays I see and use characters for versus your...

Hnnnng where to start. I have a feeling this is a character made for a very specific type of role play which is part of a culture I have very little understanding of. But it is late here and I'm still in this weird reviewing frenzy so let's knock this one out too. Crazy is defined as mentally...

A brutal pairing of Japanese trends and bastardized Norse Mythology. I note several character inconsistencies that seem to pop up when oppertune just for the sake of supposed image of character. 17 years old and the sexual attitude of a fourteen year old anime character is ripe for parody and...

Test Number: H - 404.1 Self-given name: Tatt Age: 19 Gender: Female Sexuality: Evolved out Eye Color: Milky white (blind) Hair Color: Variable Height: Variable (currently: 5' 4") Weight: variable (currently: 103lbs) Crush: None, aggressive response toward any copulative gesture...

This is a brutally honest review by Teh Frixz While off the bat I enjoy seeing a character endure tragedy, I don't see how he evolved from it. A farm boy in the city for two days loses it all and is struck down to live with the poorest of the poor. If it was here he learned to fight and steal...

Needs considerable work on background. Right now the entire idea of the character hinges on the character image and remains more of a concept then a true character. I don't see them as sweet but instead as a half finished selfishness so intense that the rest of the world is cut out by their...

A brutal honest review courtesy of Teh Frixz Going from the top of the sheet down I'll address things that catch my eye for better or for worse. I enjoy the mixture of heritage. Sort of a reversal of the classic German dude in South America we get to see a Chilean in Europe. Strong call but...

Character lacks narrative setting behind ginormous size and strength so criticizing anything beyond appearance is hard to do. 6' 10" and over 1000lbs is going to be hard to obtain with the frame you are going for, humans are thick with muscle so a lithe frame is tough to achieve when you add...