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My kid Icarus oc I've been kinda wanting tips to make her better and not have her be a edgy Mary sue which I currently think she is. Well here is here bio Name:Silver Gender:female Crush: dark pit Flaws: selfish,doesn't think things through,weak to fire,can't swim(idk where that goes xd) she...

Okay tbh I was trying really hard not to make silver a Mary sue and was trying really hard to do flaws.. But you're right clumsily isn't really a flaw. And I've been working on her reasons for her depression and mental disorders. Well imma research those now thanks for the help :D

I might change the fact that silver was exiled for no reason (forgot to write that in)

Tbh I like her kitsune side but her back story is kinda... Cringy

God my oc is cringe :l

I think my oc silver needs improvement I'll just give the important things silver is a chimera of the animals of a kitsune bird and cat. Her personality: rude sometimes. sassy,kind,depressed, is being insane personality? To be honest I think she's edgy and cringy... Her backstory silver born in...