Thank you for writing all of this. I have already have the why her family died, basically a in depth childhood, not just stating her family died. My intent for the character isn’t suppose to be edgy or over dramatic. I’m really big on motivational stories, it’s cheesy I know. I might have to...
For when I said “beauty”, it was just to state the fact most Mary Sues have amazing beauty. I do have a detailed description of what my character looks like and a picture. I appreciate the advice for a role play setting, but what about if I do a story cause I’m thinking of going more in depth in...
I’m not new to role playing but I’m still working on obtaining my writing skills. Over the years I made some OCs here and there, you might have considered Mary Sues. My recent character is considered my fully functional OC with a compelling story. However, I just want advice on what I can do to...