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It still needs work, but it's much easier on the eyes. Thanks.   So, where do his powers come from? Im not quite clear on that. 

 Aright. Here we go.  SO firstly, I noticed that no one has responded since you posted on Oct 3. That is probably because people can't read it. (Your grammar is ok, but you know know those long, overly wordy "User Agreement" document things that nobody reads? Yeeeeaaaaaahhhh. My eyes acualy...

Aright, brace your self. I can be brutally honest. 

Would you like me to proofread it?