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  1. Lycan Queen

    Naruto OC Open For Critique

    I really appreciate your honest feedback and am very grateful that you did so respectfully! I would just like to state, without teying to defend the character too much, that I did keep this fairly vague and that I did design it with express purposes in pairing it with a specific character in...
  2. Lycan Queen

    Naruto OC Open For Critique

    -bump-
  3. Lycan Queen

    Thoughts on a Serial Killer OC?

    I know, thank you for clearing that up.
  4. Lycan Queen

    Thoughts on a Serial Killer OC?

    Murderers of all types can have disorders or they don't have to, no way is accurate. I gave him unmanageable bouts of anger because it works with him as a person and creates a flaw to be overcame. This also takes away from him being so Gary Stue and makes it possible for him to slip up and leave...
  5. Lycan Queen

    Thoughts on a Serial Killer OC?

    How am I discriminating? Am I not allowed to give my characters any mental disorders? It's not like I just slapped a label onto him, I looked into the specific one I gave him.
  6. Lycan Queen

    Thoughts on a Serial Killer OC?

    Ableist?
  7. Lycan Queen

    Thoughts on a Serial Killer OC?

    Okay I do see where you're coming from here and I'll try a few edits around that particular point. Thank you for your input :)
  8. Lycan Queen

    Thoughts on a Serial Killer OC?

    I had the same concerns honestly, and this version of him is actually the more realistic one compared to the original in which he had almost zero flaws. I have looked into the conditions I've listed for him and know how to portray them, including him as a sociopath. As far as Gary-Stue goes, I...
  9. Lycan Queen

    Naruto OC Open For Critique

    So I make a lot of oc's for my favorite fandoms and one of them that I have a wide selection for is the Naruto fandom. That being said I would like thoughts on a specific one that I've already made public through an ongoing fanfiction. If you want elaboration on how she fits into the Narutoverse...
  10. Lycan Queen

    Thoughts on a Serial Killer OC?

    So I would like opinions on a character I originally created for Criminal Minds but adapted for really any mystery/action roleplay. I wanted to use him specifically for romances because of the forbidden feel, but I'm now willing to broaden it to other genres. See he comes with many perks and...
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