Okay kiddos.
I think we're ready to start character creation. Head on over to the OOC thread here.
There's a second post there for lore, but most of it isn't important and it's left empty for now. I don't want to start actually establishing lore until after we start making characters in order...
Character Sign-Ups are OPEN!
Thread is here.
The Premise
The Spiel
tldr (But you really should read.): The magic world lives right under our noses and our job is to keep it that way. Sometimes, someone screws up and makes a mess. Gets seen. Gets in trouble. Gets someone killed. We fix...
And now it's time to announce our (un)lucky winners! There are four slots and they need fillin'. You all did good work, but those who put in the extra effort are the ones who made it to the finish line.
Without further ado:
- Maika Andama Diramo aka VI
- Joseph Merrick Iscariot aka Magos
-...
Read your rewrite on the interview. Guess I was onto something after all, this one feels a lot more like you took your time and thought about it. Good job!
We'll learn a lot more about Architect in the future, but now that we've got a handler up and running, I'm going to be making and OOC thread. I'll give everyone one more day to finish up sheets and rewrite/adjust. Tomorrow, I'll be announcing our team.
Finally, a hacker! I'm surprised we've gone this long without one being submitted.
Krueger's got a nice humility to her; she seems capable without you having to oversell her. Her personality makes her very likeable and down to earth; she behaves the way a real human being would behave. There's...
Your character concept's pretty good. Well written and there's depth here so that's also good.
The only gripe I have here is the interview.
I can't put my finger on it, but something about it just feels very unsatisfying. It's not bad, but something about it feels almost contrived or forced...
@Sizniche
Still waiting for you to finish up your sheet.
So far you've got a good concept and I kind of like the new-guy angle you're taking.
He may need a little buffing in the combat department. Nothing crazy, just make it so that he's good enough to contribute to the team, even if we have...
SPESS MUHREEN
Okay now that that's out of the way, let's get to Magos.
This is a cool idea you've got going. Cyberknight with a chopper. It's so crazy, it works. He's cool as hell without needing his writer to over-advertise him. You've actually done a really good job with him.
Now that...
That's a picture of Henry Cavill...
Read: cyberpunk. Cyberpunk as in punks of cyber. Saiba-panku. A picture of Henry Cavill, star of the recent Superman movies, is not cyberpunk.
Okay so here we go.
First order of business, you want him to be unstable. Why is everyone trying to be Maika 2...