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Alright, thank you. I just looked at it again (for about my 5th time in the last week..) and I'm no longer confused. I appreciate your help:3

So, I'm sorry if I'm come off stupid.. do we do what we would like first, and then the emotions for a tie breaker? Also could it be a prose we've already done and posted? Like if it's in Chapters then just give maybe the first?

Chapter 2: Gone like the Wind (Suggestions and Constructive Criticism Welcomed.) Lynch's heart sank as he realized what'd he had done. When hearing the cops from his neighbors house he made a run for it, knowing he'd be charged with murder.. homicide.. something that has to do with death...

Thank you very much, I will definately take what you said into consideration to make the story better and I have much to happen for them.. ;) muahaha

Chapter 1: Autumn and Lynch (Suggestions and Constructive Criticism Welcomed.) Autumn and Lynch.. an odd set of young brother and sister. They got along quiet well for awhile, except for when Autumn got everythingn she wanted. This annoyed Lynch but he had always tried to shrug it...