Warm feedback: The description in the first two paragraphs (And some more towards the bottom) is really lovely, beautiful imagery.
Cool feedback:The ideas in the story are really abstract and can be hard to convey; the imagery was so well done, that it made it difficult to understand what was...
This was a story created by a friend and I based off of Tokyo Ghoul; the goal was to create a complex storyline and write it out within twenty-four hours (On google docs). I don't expect anyone to read this, but if you do, all the power to ya.
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It all began when the children of the...
I am not someone who practices drawn art, so I can't say too much. I really like, Clouded Thoughts, I think the transition of colors in the background is really beautiful. The first thing that comes to my mind when I see the picture, actually, is those commercials trying to influence people not...
I like the idea about the artifact, but I noticed that you mentioned Ace holds a "gold" artifact; but the picture looks more like a silver artifact.
The artifact is named Frio, which means cold in Spanish, so is it an ice artifact?
Does the artifact form a shield and sword?
You should clarify...