It's alright then! Just mention that the history is mostly a legend or a story, and as for the government type, mention that it's also an absolute monarchy, and that the nobles own fiefs and act as governments.
Add those and the app is accepted!
The app overall looks nice and I like the concept, but there are a few things that need to either be changed or clarified:
Feudalism wouldn't fully be feudalism without the entire feudal hierarchy, and perhaps more importantly, if the nobles don't actually own and control fiefs. At the same...
Not a single word had escaped the mercenary's mouth between when she had joined the improvised team on board of the Salvatore and their arrival in the orbit of the planet that was to be their target. It wouldn't have been too weird to assume that she was either mute or that she couldn't speak...
Astral Flame, Stateless Space
Despite the rather decrepit appearance of the conference room they were in, with what looked like the stains of smoke and even of something vaguely resembling a mix of very dried and old blood from multiple species on the walls, the air system still seemed to be...
LORE THREAD
Introduction
All beings, once they are born, long for the stars. They look up into the dark skies, and feel the call of the small sparkles of light. They look at them and find gods, hope, mysteries, or even the future. Even as they are constrained to their own planet, entire...
Astral Flame, Stateless Space
Once, in the past, the Astral Flame used to be a cutting-edge diplomatic space station for a nation whose name had long been lost. What peace deals had been negotiated on its hallways is a fact long lost to history, with details depending on who told the story, from...
Now this is a nation that the Hegemony would get along with well, accepted!
You should make an app for the Qehzz eventually, but since they have such small numbers it shouldn't be an issue for now