Must use somewhat proper grammar! (Capitalization, punctuation, correct their/they're/there, correct your/you're, correct use of ') If you don't know what kind to use or if your grammar is correct, there are tons of resources online! I don't mean the whole bs list of grammar rules, but just the...
Several moments had passed, and yet Dain's eyes were still distant as he stared at the castle walls. It had been several years since he'd seen the family coming to visit. Their kingdom wasn't as noteworthy as some of the others, and as such they'd easily accepted being absorbed into the mass of...
He shrugged, "That's the only bit that doesn't fit in. I have no idea...," He sighed, "Wish we could just go back to bed."
(this turned out rly awkward sorry about that xD )