GAH, I knew starting any RP during exam season would be tricky, but this is seriously kicking my ass...if you don't hear anything from me by Monday, then I'll have to drop out of this one and open up room for others.
DW man, it's not personal at all - I just wanted to know what I did wrong so I can learn from it, yknow? Anyways have a good one, enjoy your RP and I hope we bump into each other soon!
@MrBossMan for one sitting, that's a really eloquent CS you got there! I'm a big fan of your writing style too. It's clear and easy to read without losing the descriptive elements. Literally the only thing that made me quirk a brow was that you spelt Anthony with an I. Why'd you spell it like...
I don't think I replied to the GM's questions.
To maintain a solid group dynamic in the long term, which is what it sounds like you're planning to do, I'd give character death a wide berth. In fact, I wouldn't even push characters into dangerous events too frequently until they've got to know...
Name: Dinah
Age: Several hundred years old, the exact number has been lost to time.
Race: Other (Godling)
Gender: Female
Appearance: Dinah stands at around 3 feet 5 inches. She has the pot-belly of a starving child and mottled blueish skin, marked with black ink tattoos that has long since...
I also finished my sheet, but I wasn't sure whether or not it was ok to post it on the character's tab so I sent it via PM to our glorious overlord.
EDIT: He gave me the green light to post it on the characters tab, I'll do so shortly!
At the very least, give her a little more optimism. From the sounds of it, she's too jaded to logically want to join the adventuring party to fix this curse. Perhaps a personal reason? Someone she knows is sick and dying? She initially wants to just get to the bottom of it so she can go home and...
Ouch, that's a big problem in your high concept...because as it stands right now, she'd profit quite well from the curse. Or maybe she isn't. Maybe the fact that the crops are failing means the farmers are becoming more and more impoverished. She's being forced to take on riskier and riskier...
Oh my word, so many messages! Lemme see if I can lend a hand here too. Defenestrator's notorious for having big plans but not having the words to put them in. In return all I ask is that someone teaches me how to put things into a spoiler please oh my goodness I have everything sorted for the CS...
Oh damn, I didn't know this thread existed. What an ignorant buffoon I was! Alright, I'll put this CS on the fast-track then to get it done before then.