Vulpine Sernebris

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"Bow to me, and me alone. Betray me, and I'll rip away all of your freedoms with nothing but my fangs."

-Name-

Vulpine Sernebris

-Age-

17

-Gender-

Female

-Race-

Vassal of Sernebris

Serpent

-Spouse-

None




-Date of Birth-

May 4

• Appearance
• Belongings
• Capabilities
• Personal Info

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  -Height-
  
  5ft 6im
  
  -Weight-
  
  119 Lbs
  
  -Hair-
  
  Long curls of deep black, Vulpine had rather beautiful hair. Naturally, it is a pitch black which produces a vivid hue of white when in the light of the sun creating a nice mix of colors. These dark curls fall to be just below her shoulder blades, however she normally doesn't allow them to hang loose. Instead, she keeps them held up in a pair of high pigtails. This raises her ends to be a few inches above her shoulders. Her bangs are cut in a blunt bob style with longer side bangs framing her face. These bangs end just above her eyes and curl around her face. Typically, Vulpine will decorate her hair with a pair of purple bows which hold her pigtails in place. Most of the time, her hair is rather neat, combed an washes on a daily basis. However, from time to time she will allow it to get a little messy if she is on her own and expecting no company.
  
  
  
  
  -Eyes-
  
  Sharp and reptilian, Vulpine has a pair of vivid violet eyes. Just like that of a snake's she has a sharp slit for a pupil rather than a soft and rounded orb. To some, the oddness of her eyes is quite alluring, to others its plain creepy and uninviting. Unlike most people's eyes, one can not gaze into Vulpine's mind if they try and explore her purple pools. Instead, they'll be staring right into a facade. No matter what her thoughts may be, Vulpine always has soft and unemotional eyes, a must for a girl as deceptive as she. If she was unable to mask her thoughts, then she would have never been able to succeed in any of her plots. To make herself unpredictable, she must always uphold this mask over her gaze.
  
  
  However, whenever Vulpine uses any of her more magical properties, these eyes of her's change. The purple becomes rich more vivid, mixing with splotches of blue white, creating quite the beautiful sight. They take on the appearance comparable to a galaxy. This is however a sight few people get to see for long... Typically, those who witness these eyes of her's don't live for long. After all, she never does use her powers to help others. To destroy and control, that's what they are for.
  
  
  
  
  -Body-
  
  Vulpine has rather fit body, skinny but strong. She's angular, with light feet and thin frame, and while she may not appear to be too powerful in truth she holds strength above that of an average person. Stronger than most men, she isn't a force one would wish to mess with. She can break bones with a punch, and at the same time she is quite durable. This is due to the fact that her human body had literally been handcrafted by a God, one who intended to use her as his vassal in the human world, so of course she would need to be strong. Yet, he did wish to make her body a little misleading, so that she may draw in unsuspecting prey with her looks.
  
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  -Casual-
  
  Most often, Vulpine is seen in dark clothing. Instead of the typical white and gold native to her home land, Vulpine tends to stick to blacks, blues, and dark purples. Whenever she does wear jewelry, it is normally silver paired with amethyst, sapphire, onyx, or black diamond. Her odd choice of coloring was quite notable in her homeland, and once more some people found it interesting while others saw it to be a denotation of danger. Vulpine does often wear sleeveless dresses with waist bands and imbedded jewelry, something comparable to a greek god or egyptian wear.
  
  -Night wear-
  
  Vulpine light and loose clothing when she sleeps. Nightgowns are what she chooses most often, though from time to time she will go with something more simple like a t-shirt and shorts. It depends on the temperature, and who she is around if she needs to sleep near anyone else. So, her style may change up from time to time based on her surroundings.
  
  -Fancy-
  
  Vulpine certainly knows how to doll herself up. Sometimes, it is necessary to dress up in order to catch her victims, and to get them wrapped around her finger. So, it is a must that she be good at this. When it is time to show off a bit, while she still does choose dark colors, her clothing becomes rather elaborate and flowy. She tends to highlight her torso and waist, for she does find them to be her best bodily features. While her legs are quite long and thin, she feels that too many other girls have legs such as her's, and so she doesn't consider them to be all that special. She also adds emphasis to her eyes, softening down so they appear inviting an warm. In such a way, Vulpine makes herself look more matured and welcoming, to attract more unsuspecting prey.
  
  -Combat-
  
  When ready for battle, Vulpine normally clothes herself in light armor. While she is capable of wearing the heavier stuff, she feels that the ability to move quickly is better than that of heavy defense. In such a way, she chooses a more offensive form of combat rather than a defensive one. It may be a bit of a reckless choice, but this girl has the power to be reckless, and so she uses it. Her armor normally consists of a chest plate, and something to guard her forearms and legs. In addition, she tends to wear chainmail ( or a vest depending on the time period of the roleplay ) underneath her clothing, to ensure extra protection incase she acts a little too slowly. While her armor isn't strong, it still would be able to repel the touch of a blade.
  
  
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  -Bag-
  
  Vulpine is in possession of black leather bag, one in which she keeps most of her belongings. From money, to extra supplies of food and water, she can fit quite a bit into this little sack. It fits nicely, a padded strap resting upon her right shoulder while the bag's end leans against her hip. For a girl like her, the bag really isn't that heavy at all.
  
  -Hair Ribbons-
  
  A pair of silk ribbons are almost always laced into Vulpine's hair. They are a dark purple color, matching her reptilian eyes. They hold her hair up in the style of pigtails, however these little ribbons are more than just a hair accessory. Instead, these ties absorb the light of the stars far above, granting the girl with her power. Due to the fact that this power she has isn't natural to her body, she must recharge it every month or so, to avoid being rendered a snake once again.
  
  -Cage-
  
  Hanging from her waist, Vulpine has a small cage with thin bars strapped onto her waist band. The bars are much too close together for the snake within it to slither out, guaranteeing the reptile's residence in the cage until Vulpine chooses to let him out. This black and purple snake goes by the name of Maledictionem, or just Nem for short. He functions as Vulpine's weapon, which is explained in the section just below this.
  
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  <p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/Sword2.png.4cbf1bf9973a8f00dcf7b6470badafb1.png" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="56568" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/Sword2.png.4cbf1bf9973a8f00dcf7b6470badafb1.png" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p> Vulpine's main weapon is a sword by the name of Maledictionem, hand crafted by the Goddess of forge, Flamma. She crafted it to repay a favor to Sernebris, and the snake God then gifted this blade to his most promising vassal, Vulpine. It has been her weapon ever since the day she was created 17 years ago, and not yet has the weapon even chipped or broken. As Vulpine gets stronger, as does her weapon, permitting the blade a long life of power and conflict so long as Vulpine too is alive and well. This also means that when Vulpine is injured, her blade too will weaken. As a result, she must be extra careful when going out into battle if she is wounded in any manner. The weapon also holds a few other tricks, on being a second form.
  
  When she commands it, this blade will transform itself into the form of a snake. This reptile will be small in size, with black scales holding a green hues and a purple diamond pattern along its back. It's only about a foot in length, much smaller than the sword itself which is about four feet long. The snake is obedient to Vulpine alone, and it will not transform into its bladed form for any other person. This loyalty was forged into it as well, by the goddess Flamma.
  
  The weapon has only one other trick, and this would be it's poison. Just like the snake from which it is formed, the blade of this blade too can produce its own poison when Vulpine requests it. When she says nothing, the blade is nothing more than normal metal, but when she demands it this weapon will be coated in a sickly hue of green, the signification of the poison upon its blade. She can choose as well whether or not to make the poison deadly. In regards to this she had three options: sedation, paralyzation, or death.
  
  Overall, this sword is quite the powerful and deadly one. Her opponent should be wary whenever she may draw it.
  
  
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  -Swordplay-
  
  Vulpine is skilled on various forms of sword play, all taught to her by the God for whom she works, Sernebris. She has come to master the way of the blade, however this does not mean that she is unbeatable. However, being trained by a God does make her a rather powerful force, one that most people would not be able to handle if they were to face off against her. This makes her job quite easy for her, due to how naturally fighting comes to her whenever she must raise her blade to an opponent.
  
  
  
  
  -Martial Arts-
  
  While her hand-to-hand skills aren't as great as her swordplay, she is still capable of holding her ground in a fist fight. Her durable and fast body grants her an advantage, and not to mention her strength can be overwhelming for some. One should remain wary even after Vulpine has been disarmed, for still she is very capable of killing with her bare hands.
  
  -Arts-
  
  While she may not seem to be the type of girl, Vulpine also has some experience in the arts of music, dance, literature, and art. She was brought up to be prepared for most any situation, and this includes the trickery towards noble men and women. She must be prepared to deceive those of both the high and low classes, and in order to come into contact with power of high standing, she must have some sort of impressive talents. In addition, she is also quite the actress, but not in a good way. She uses this skill to trick and manipulate the people around her, putting on a facade to lure them into her traps and weaken them.
  
  -Language-
  
  Vulpine had come to learn several different languages over time, in order to complete some of her missions in other countries. In truth, english is her third language, latin being her first. Yet, its quite hard to tell for she speaks it fluently, her accent barely noticeable. One would only notice it if they had very perceptive ears.
  
  -Persuasion-
  
  Vulpine has a tongue as sharp as a snakes, her ability with words is quite amazing. She rarely speaks the truth, and when she does it's normally only a fragment of that truth. As a result, she is highly deceptive and a very dangerous person. She can trick you into most anything, finding the weakest pieces of your mind and using them to her advantage without much mercy at all. If needed, she will completely break her opponent with her harsh and venomous words in order to assure that she has her victim in the palm of her hand.
  
  -Poisons-
  
  The snake side of her is naturally interested in poison, and so Vulpine had taken up studying this on her own time. She has come to learn how to craft her own poisons, and how she can use them when out in battle. Often, she has many little vials of poison within her bag at all times, to ensure that she would have them when she needs them.
  
  -Housework-
  
  Surprisingly, Vulpine is quite good at both cooking and cleaning. With no one else being around to keep the shrine in shape, during what time she spent there Vulpine had to keep it in shape and care for her own self. As a result, she did get practice in maintaining a home and feeding herself.
  
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  -Snake Form-
  
  Vulpine has the ability to transform herself into the form of a snake, the very animal she used to be. In this form, she had a slick body made up by pitch black scales. A line of purple scales extend from the left side of both her eyes, matching the violet iris. In this form, she brings with her the very same eyes that she has in her human form, allowing those who know her well to identify her even when she is a snake. She uses this form mostly to gather information or eaves, for her tiny body can get almost anywhere. As a result, she can easily hide herself away from others.
  
  -Corruption-
  
  Using this ability, Vulpine can draw out the darkness from deep inside a person and allow it to consume them. However, she had to first understand that darkness. She must know where it comes from, and why the person feels in such a way before bringing it forth and allowing it to rampage. In order to figure this out, Vulpine often plays the role of a comforter and crutch, to gain her targets trust. Then, when she feels the time is right she directs the conversation in such a way that she will get the other person to tell her of their darker feelings. Once this is done, she needs only to mutter a single spell which goes as follows:
  
  "Espa fra. Devarary dar dex me parada que. Alcan faye panaque. Daska feir vasilikique. Quedream, ad dawn quedream ma dal gra. Falladreamque, zentle kaye."
  
  From that point on until the following morning, the person will be held under the control of their hatred. When the sunrise comes the next morning, the victim will be freed from the spell, unless they do something drastic.
  
  -Energy Manipulation-
  
  Using the energy her ties gather from the stars, Vulpine can conjure items and create attacks as well as improve her defenses. She is able to form walls and barriers to protect her from upcoming hits, as well as form spikes of energy to impale her opponents. These attacks use simply verbal demands. To bring energy out she simply says "Gra." To stop expelling energy, she must say "Pala." When she wishes to conjure something she had to say "Dezly" then the name of whatever she wants to make speaking in the language of the fallen gods, this includes Sernebris. For example, if she wanted to make a spike she must say "Dezly kex" and picture the form of the spike in her mind. If she does this right, the spike will appear where she imagined it and how she imagined it.
  
  -God's Eye-
  
  "Fexla mi lilyme highra, paradami view. Miplatza view murmurs midream parview."
  
  This is the spell to summon forth the wisdom of the Gods. After saying this, Vulpine will be placed into a dream so that her spirit may enter the realm of the Gods far above, or down below. Due to being a vassal of Sernebris, she isn't welcomed in the heavens, but she can still enter the holy lands under the risk of being attacked. If she is killed in the heavens, she will never wake from the sleep she placed herself into. The same will happen if she is killed in the underworld, but it's unlikely that she will be placed into conflict there. While she is in this dream she can speak with the Gods and request their word or aid. Its also a way for her to communicate with her own God, Sernebris.
  
  
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  -Likes-
  
  Being in control, power, conflict, moonflowers and spider lilies, complex people, sensitive people, candy, children, snakes.
  
  -Dislikes-
  
  Boring people, disobedience, rejection, roses, summer heat, winter's cold.
  
  Vulpine is a very terrible woman, just like the God for whom she works for. She's manipulative, and she will hurt anyone or anything to get what she wants. For other people she has little to no regards, and as a result she feels almost nothing when taking witness to another person in pain or misery. She may pretend to from time to time to deceive the people around her, but that's only an act. In truth, she doesn't care at all. From this information, some people may consider her to be something like a sociopath, but this simply isn't true. While things people would expect to trigger her emotions don't, she still does have them. Only people close to her can really bring forth those feelings of regret or sorrow, but few people have such power over her. Other than her snake, Maledictionem, Vulpine cares for no one. She doesn't even feel anything for Sernebris the God she works for. Really, the woman holds plans to overthrow her God. While she does do as she is told, she is only trying to fool him. In reality she's waiting until she has more power, and a chance to strike down the powerful deity. Aside from this, Vulpine is a very intelligent and crafty woman. She knows how people work, and she is very aware of what they seek. She uses what information she has come to gather on a person to deceive and break them, forcing them into dependency and loyalty. It's quite the good skill to have for a girl who plans to be a future tyrant. Vulpine can also be quite teasing, in both playful and cruel ways. She loves to stirr up other people's emotions, getting them mad, sad or embarrassed, and she enjoys pushing others into arguments or conflict. When others suffer in front of her, she finds amusement and joy. However, its a very different story whenever someone she likes is hurt or sad. When this occurs, Vulpine is quick to jump to their defense. She fends off their worries, before tending to them and comforting them until they are once again in fine shape. However, she has treated very few people like this, for her trust is quite the difficult thing to gain. One must wonder, is it really worth putting up with this horrid woman for so long in order to gain such a wonderful friend? That's a matter of opinion, and of person.
  
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  When she began, Vulpine had little to say. She couldn't even utter a single word, for she didn't have the voice of a human. Instead, she had only the hiss of a serpent. During the first year of her life, Vulpine was nothing more than a snake. A wild animal with no tale to tell. In that form, her intelligence was limited and her body weak. She can't recall anything from that part of her life, due simply to how drastically her mind had been altered when she was gifted with her secondary form of a human being.
  
  It happened at the end of her first year as a snake, when the girl had wandered to a place none choose to venture: the old shrine of the God of discord, revenge, and gluttony, Sernebris. The snake however, had no clue about this or truly any human legends, and so she simply wandered into the shrine without much of a care. She squeezed herself through a hole in the doorframe, squirming about until she dropped down onto dusty and cracked stone floors. The snake slithered about curiously, not knowing that she was currently being watched by a rather dangerous force through the marble eyes of a nearby statue carved quite beautifully into a large serpent. The snake wasn't alerted to the other's presence for quite a while, until her dark eyes accidentally met with those of the statue. It was in the very moment that an odd fascination was crafted into her, drawing her in and causing her to near the unfamiliar stone. She slithered near, closer and closer until she was right in front of structure, staring up at it with eyes of curiosity.
  
  It was then that quite suddenly, the marble eyes of the stature gleamed a vivid purple. The shrine shook, the wind picked up, and with a blinding flash of violet light the statue had collected its color. Now, beholding scales of neon green, blue, and a deep gray the serpent uncoiled itself from the pedestal it resided upon, snaking up to its smaller kin upon the ground. Looming over the younger snake, the beast sunk its ivory fangs deep into the other snake's frail body, however this didn't kill her. No poison had been injected, instead only power and been pushed into her.
  
  This was how the Vulpine which exists today was born.
  
  It was the next morning that she woke to find herself in a new form. That of a human baby, only a year old. Crying and squirming about on the cold floors, it was the serpent from the day before that came to comfort the young child. Bringing her into the warmth of his body, snaking himself delicately around the child and allowing her to distract herself with his tail's end, the serpent soothed the child, and until the age of five, he cared for her well.
  
  Once the girl was old enough to walk and begin to learn, the serpent took up the role of a teacher rather than a father. Vulpine's days changed from lazing about and playing, to work and learning much too quickly. She began involve herself with swordplay, the arts, combate, anything the serpent chose to train her in. By the age of ten, she was already quite prepared to head out into the alien world which existed outside the shrine's forest. This was also the age where she was given her first task, to capture the fortune of a nobleman in the town neighboring the forest.
  
  Vulpine accepted this mission, departing from the shrine for the first time in her life. It was quite the interesting experience, being in such a new place with nothing but her own person. Yet, the girl was far from being scared. After all, she already knew that she had been gifted the power of the god Sernebris. The people around her were nothing but weak, pitiful humans, this was what she had been taught.
  
  Upon arriving at the mansion of the noble man, Vulpine had taken on the act of a beggar. She told quite the tale, claiming her mother and father had both recently been lost to sickness, and the she desperately needed a home or else she may die. She promised that she would work for the noble as a maid, so long as he granted her a place to reside and eat. The guards had been hesitant about letting her in, but the girl had won them over. It wasn't long before she was standing in front of the very noble she had come to meet.
  
  Once more, that sad tale was told, and yet again it had won over the man before her. Vulpine's offer was accepted, and just like that the first piece of her plan was a success. She got into the mansion, and now it was time to begin on her true goal... obtaining the riches this mansion had to offer.
  
  How did she do this? Well, she won over the heart of the nobleman. Acting sweet and kind, even trying to be cute, Vulpine managed to build a daughter father connection with the older man. She held his heart in the palm of her hand, and this was something which she took to her own advantage. With cunning words, she had gotten the man to agree to signing off all of his belongings to her come his death. Once the document was approved and finalized, Vulpine was quick to betray.
  
  One night, as the noble was sleeping, Vulpine intruded his room. She shut the door behind her, locking it up tight before revealing a blade of glass in the palm of her little hand. Approaching the bedside, she pulled herself up onto the soft mattress, waking the noble with playful words and giggles. He woke with a smile, greeting the girl who he had come to adore, but that smile quickly faded.
  
  His eyes grew wide, his body stiff, Vulpine had thrusted that glass right into his throat. She watched in amusement as he choked upon his own blood, coughing and wheezing, until he was gone. The following week, all of his belonging had been gifted to her.
  
  Vulpine had succeeded in her first mission.
  
  She returned to the shrine with riches all loaded upon a single carriage, showing her success to a very pleased Sernebris. She was granted half of what she had collected, along with a rather unexpected present from Sernibris himself. The sword known as Maledictionem. Happily, she accepted the blade, very pleased to have her very first weapon. Already Vulpine was well on her way, perhaps a bit too well. For it was only a year later that Vulpine had devised her newest and biggest plan.
  
  She would betray even Sernebris, her very own god.
  
  Vulpine now had a hunger for power. She had begun to work for herself rather than the praise of her God, collecting her power in hopes to one day overthrow this beast. Once she does, she plans to take his position as a God, and then she would begin to pick off the others Gods and Goddesses one by one until she would be the last one remaining. When that time comes... she would then take possession of the world, forming a new playground for herself.
  
  To this day, Vulpine is still working on her devilish plot, growing and growing, becoming more and more of a threat. One can only hope that this vile little girl will be changed soon, or it may bring about the end of the world.
  
  

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[Dovinique]

Wow you really make a very detailed character here, my friend! Great one! You should get more appreciations, you know. I can even visualizing it well in my mind, how she moves, she kills, everything. In short way, you make her alive! Love the font too (:3)


However, there are couple of things that bothering me here, please correct me if I'm wrong or if I miss something


First, don't you think that Vulpine should has weaknesses too? She is a little bit too strong here. Like a very destructive weapon. Are you actually intended to make her unbeatable?


Second, her biography and her weapon's description is inconsistent. In her bio, you say that Sernibris gave her Maledictionem after she succeeded her first mission, but in Maledictionem's description, you say that Maledictionem had been her weapon since she was created 17 years ago.


Third, just some random opinion, I'm quiet sad that Vulpine wanted to betray her God despite of what he had done to her. I mean, it's kind of normal when a vassal wanted to be more than his master and in her condition, she was a bad bad bad bad person, right? What makes me sad here is her God seems good, he didn't do anything wrong to her or anyone and 17 years is long enough for someone to create strong bond. Maybe she is just thirst of power or any other explanation? This thing makes me wonder, what kind of act must be done to make her trust someone? Is it love? Cliche?


Okay, that's all! This is my very first review so please mind my mistakes (^.^)

 

[xXRassBerriXx]

Hehe~ Thank you! About the font, I use a website called cooltext.com. It's how I make most of my titles~


In regards to her weaknesses, she does have them, I just didn't go full detail with those. She isn't unbeatable, while she is a powerful girl she can still be injured. For example, I stated that her hand-to-hand skills aren't as great as her melee skills. While she can fair well against an untrained person or a street fighter, someone with more talent in that field could easily beat her if they were only fighting hand-to-hand. She also does have the body of a normal human being, and while it can be repaired by her god, if she dies, then she's gone. Her soul would be given to a different god who controls the dead, and Sernebris would need to go through a lot of trouble if he wants to get her back.


About her weapon... that was a typo! Sorry, this is my first draft for her, so I may have a couple mistakes in it! Thanks for mentioning that, I'll clear it up soon!


Really, Vulpine is a vile woman. She dislikes Sernebris because she feels that he is too weak, that he hides in the shadows far too much. She does the dirty work for him, and she distastes the fact that he seems unable to get his own hands dirty. As for what could make her come to like a person, she actually enjoys people of innocence. She enjoys interesting people who she has trouble figuring out, as well as the strong minded. Normally, if you can keep her entertained for long enough she will begin to develope a connection to you, but she found that figuring out Sernebris was much too easy and simple, which is why she never really connected wit her God.