TMI's drawing (Critique/Advice needed!)

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Just recently started drawing seriously.


My scanner broke down and still being serviced right now, so had to take the picture with my mobile phone.


Don't have any tablet, still deciding whether to buy one or not (Since drawing with Photoshop looks interesting)


Recently started drawing my own Overwatch OC, because there is no hero that comes from SEA yet.

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I'll just put here and hide in the corner

 

[TripTripleTimes]

I think your front view is looking good and so is the hand there. The only thing i would say is chin being off center, but maybe you were going for a little tilt to the side? If not, symmetry is a big thing when drawing the human body of any style. So keep an eye on that and keep at it, too much idea!

 

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Thanks! Fixed the chin and drew his body, hopefully i can post it tonight :>

 

[Space Dingo]

I see how the chin looks off-center. I think the head face you drew is one that is ever so slightly turning to their right side (our left) but the facial features are facing dead center. I think this is a thing a lot of artists sometimes suffer from (including me), but maybe a way to help with the whole symmetry thing is draw a faint curved line that you can erase later from the chin up to the forehead to get a sense of how the face should face? if that makes sense?

 

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I see how the chin looks off-center. I think the head face you drew is one that is ever so slightly turning to their right side (our left) but the facial features are facing dead center. I think this is a thing a lot of artists sometimes suffer from (including me), but maybe a way to help with the whole symmetry thing is draw a faint curved line that you can erase later from the chin up to the forehead to get a sense of how the face should face? if that makes sense?

I did that. I drew the facial expression off course. I'll fix the chin ASAP

 

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Chen Fei, my oc from Avatar: Spirits Awakening


i tried

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Also, @radiochai @TripTripleTimes


Fixed the chin


Sorry for potato quality, my scanner hasn't returned yet

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5 years difference





11th Dec 2010

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28th December 2015

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