Tenebrae (Ten)

[Oberons Veil]

Tenebrae (Ten)

Introduction

Tenebrae is Darkness and Evil incarnate, but opts to appear more... innocent to allow for a greater amount of pain and sorrow to be brought to the unsuspecting peoples.

Basics

Name: Tenebrae (Ten)


Age: Unknown


Race: Primordial


Gender: Male


Sexual Orientation: Unknown


Occupation: Primordial of Evil, Chaos, and Darkness.'


Alignment: Chaotic (Possibly Chaotic-Neutral)

• Appearance
• Personality
• Misc.

• Appearance
  
  Height: 6'1''
  
  
  Weight: 142lbs.
  
  
  Hair: Keeping his hair short but not necessarily kept, Ten has a white or silver hair color that perfectly frames his red eyes.
  
  
  Eyes: Red
  
  
  Body: Slim
  
  
  Attire: Wearing the clothing of a Prince or a Common teenager, Ten likes to blend in but stand out at the same time.
  
  
  True Form Description : Tenebrae takes on the form of a teenager just like his other appearances, though this time losing the white hair and replacing it with black hair with red tips. His skin takes on a more pale tone, and his red eyes fade to a darker crimson color. Wearing a simple red shirt, black coat that stretched to just below his knees, he is a rather imposing force for one that chooses to have a smaller appearance. An aura of darkness, hate, malice and all things evil seems to emanate from him, coming from his heart, a thing of pure darkness, or pure evil, hatred. In this form he wields magic that is powerful, capable of summoning up weapons from the darkness, weapons that inflict normal wounds, as well as those of great suffering. A favorite is his nightshadow bow, capable of shooting arrows made from sorrow and hatred, infecting others with great distress.
  
  
  
  
  
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  Favored Humanoid Form Description : Ten loves the appearance of youth, taking on a teenager who has white or silver hair, red eyes and fair skin. Typically posing as a Prince or Upperclassmen thus allowing him the freedom to do as he pleases without getting asked question. Though he is more than capable of keeping the appearance but disguising himself as lower class. Ten will typically use this form whenever and with whoever keeping up the appearance that evil resides in youth more than in any other.
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  

  

  
  
  
  Favored Animal Form Description : Ten takes on the animal appearance of a black cat, keeping his red eyes and agile form.
• Personality
  
  Quiet, reserved, malicious, corrupting, vengeful, and evil are words that could easily be used to describe Ten. He is many things, while being nothing at the same time. Dark and brooding he plots the demise of all, even his fellow Primordials. His thoughts are consumed by evil, his true being is one that wishes to destroy the Universe and remake it in his image, chaos will reign if he has his way. Ten loves to spend his time on Mundus or any of the Mortal Worlds, watching and observing the people, the Gods and the rest of creation go about their daily lives. Ten didn't care about whether or not the people had families, lives or anything really, all he cared about was corrupting the good, spreading discontent and bringing an end to the happiness that seemed to overflow in the world. It made him sick to think that people were happy, and to Ten, he had to change that.
  
  
  
• Misc.
  
  Favourite Colour : Crimson
  
  
  Treasure Item : A dagger.
  
  
  Precious Gem : Garnet
  
  
  

 

[Thinslayer]

There's really nothing about this villain that truly challenges the protagonists. He's basically a meat bag for them to punch on, a one-dimensional boss fight at the end of the game. You may want to consider the things that motivate him, the beliefs that drive him, and a background to color him. More importantly, give him personality traits that give the heroes an internal conflict. Meat bags are little fun for story RPs.

 

[Oberons Veil]

Thank you for the feedback as it is much appreciated! The protagonists actually happen to be Gods which are one step down from the Primordial Four to which Tenebrae belongs. As the RP is ongoing I am opting to hold back information that would otherwise be placed on this CS, mainly to avoid letting the cat out of the bag before the time truly comes. As we have evil and good Gods, Tenebrae is supposed to be the "obvious" enemy and internal conflict is turning those that are "good" against those that are "evil" will they actually fight their siblings to take out Ten or not, kind of thing.