[Department of Defense against the Supernatural]Daevan

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Daevan

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Basics

Name: Devan Umbras


Age: Unknown


Physical Age: 19[Variable]



Species: Nether Spirit



Gender: Male



Sexual Orientation: Unknown



Occupation: Hunter





  • Appearance

    Height: Variable


    Weight: Variable



    Hair: Black



    Eyes: Gray



    Body: Lean


    Attire: A collared shirt with a v shaped opening and two tails at the back, along with jeans, and a pair of shoes.





 
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Hel is at band camp this week and won't be on at all, I don't think. I'll look him over.
 
Okay. I think he's decent but I might suggest removing the nether seal altogether and ask that he not have the power to destroy the physical world, since it doesn't have much of a bearing if it's sealed anyway, you know? And I categorized Astral magic -- magic draw. From the sun and stars -- as a subcategory of Aether/ethereal magic. However, this being said, I'd love for you to put a bit more emphasis on and expand upon the oblivion magic, which I can imagine would be a good nether parallel to astral magic.


I also would like you to nerf a stat or two — being super strong, fast, and durable all at once is a bit much, I think.


Aside from that... He has no history xD Then he's good.
 
Sleipnir said:
Okay. I think he's decent but I might suggest removing the nether seal altogether and ask that he not have the power to destroy the physical world, since it doesn't have much of a bearing if it's sealed anyway, you know? And I categorized Astral magic -- magic draw. From the sun and stars -- as a subcategory of Aether/ethereal magic. However, this being said, I'd love for you to put a bit more emphasis on and expand upon the oblivion magic, which I can imagine would be a good nether parallel to astral magic.
I also would like you to nerf a stat or two — being super strong, fast, and durable all at once is a bit much, I think.


Aside from that... He has no history xD Then he's good.
Hey, I'm done! How's it look?


@Sleipnir
 
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Okay, he looks pretty good now as long as you remember to make him wear out. He is on the strong side, compared the other characters, but remember to make him fatigued from his powers and you're good :)
 

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