Poetry My best poem (could use work ofc)

[Sylvio]

Satisfy my thirst
Everlasting
Nothing else can brighten up my day
Dressed you are and you know what I’m gonna say

Not again will you deny me
Understand my need for what you have
Dawn upon me the gems you have
End my begging and give me what I need
Such as the helpless soul I am, you will now feed

 

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hell yeah

slam it

i like how absolutely fucking aggro it is
It's just so powerful and possessive, it's harsh and almost sadistic. It's some words on a page that instantly just gave a picture and a personality. It's so one-minded and desperate and I admire how you just went all into it. I assume you're an amateur, but that's something most starting artists are afraid to do. The power of negative emotions here is so great without ever being edgy. Thank for the contribution to humanity, bruv.