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ElectraHeart

Don't fall in love, there's just too much to lose
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Hello guys! Okay, so I came up with something awhile ago and I really want to expand on it. I like to have a story within my poetry but I don't know. But here's what I have, and I just want to be able to put a story somewhere, whether the piece be in the beginning or the middle. I just would like some ideas. </p>


<div style="text-align:center;"><p><span style="font-family:'Courier New';">She wanted to Be a princess, But the whole time She only related to The villains.</span></p></div>


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Hey, I'm Carolina. As for putting a story within poetry is brilliant!


Anyway for some suggestions; maybe describe why Electra relates to the villains? Explain in haiku a past for her, or present time?


or what made her feel that way and how it came to be?
 

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