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Poetry >> wrought and workshopped
NOTES. I forgot about this thread for a little bit, and there are still several pieces to post. The writing camp is long over by now, but I stumbled upon my old folder today and thought I'd finish putting everything up! This one is an ekphrastic poem. I could go on and on about the painting, to... -
Poetry >> wrought and workshopped
NOTES. I got too excited about this piece, so here it is: my official finished story for Brandy's class this week. I wrote it in two hours last night (the story was due today). Brandy always has a lot of criticism to give out, but for this piece she only gave me, like, one suggestion for... -
Poetry >> wrought and workshopped
NOTES. An edgy poem about school? Why not. This is the companion piece to Ode to the Outdoor Classroom at Bluff Park in 2007. Outdoor classroom v. indoor classroom, freedom v. restraint, open space v. confinement, etc. This poem was five times easier to write and went through way fewer changes... -
Poetry >> wrought and workshopped
BIHH WHAT THE FUCK IZZY I LOVE YOU AGDJFHLSBLG WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVE YOU thank you so much for saying all of that i feel a lot better about the outdoor classroom poem now :') hehehe adam said "Chlorophylled, I breathed green." was his favorite line too -
Poetry >> wrought and workshopped
NOTES. This was the first poem I wrote for the workshop. It's been revised to hell and back, and Adam had a really strong hand in the process. I deadass reverted one of his changes back because I didn't like it lol. Honestly, I don't know how I feel about this piece? Not much to say about it... -
Poetry >> wrought and workshopped
NOTES. This is actually a collaborative poem written by myself and three other people at the end of the first week. Can you sense the different writing styles in the poem? The actual sheet of paper we wrote it on looks super cool. The poem was edited by me and Adam, but we basically just added... -
Poetry >> wrought and workshopped
WROUGHT & WORKSHOPPED.i've gonna be participating in a creative writing workshop at the local university for the next two weeks. considering i'm a high school student in a college-level workshop (on a full scholarship too!! AHH!), the writing pace is pretty rigorous. i've produced a whole bunch...