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  1. Trevor B Harper

    Story The "Incomplete" (A W.I.P. progressively written mini-novel)

    ------------------------- The bumps on the gravel road hit Lycus' bottom as if someone were to kick him.The lanky, but dense trees blocked off most of the sunlight surrounding them from both sides. The adventures in Lycus' life had already begun. With a leather bag full of food and clothes at...
  2. Trevor B Harper

    Story The "Incomplete" (A W.I.P. progressively written mini-novel)

    Thanks @Spirits N Souls for such a positive reply. :) Not a long wait, here's chapter 2: -------------------- The crystal clear ever running water reflected Lycus' picture above the river life that was never sleeping there. Many fish-like creatures swam along the current, but all Lycus...
  3. Trevor B Harper

    Story The "Incomplete" (A W.I.P. progressively written mini-novel)

    Thank you, Villain King. I will make sure to make the appropriate changes as your suggestions seem to make sense. :) I am glad to receive this kind of critique when it's not only "O hey, cool story brah" , but also insights on some negative aspects. :)
  4. Trevor B Harper

    Story The "Incomplete" (A W.I.P. progressively written mini-novel)

    Good morning, day or night to you, my fellow RpN visitor. You might have clicked on this thread for many reasons: You've been asked to, you were bored, you clicked on my signature, but one way or the other, this peeked your interest. Was it the whole idea that caught your eye? The...
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