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Would love some feedback. This is mainly just the first chapter of the book, and was made to introduce things without being an info-dump.

Chapter 1 “You should’ve never glanced at that note boy,” gruffed a scruffy middle-aged man in the room’s center. He paused to strike a match on the roof’s jagged ceiling before bringing its ember light up to a rusted pipe. With a puff of vapor that permeated the room’s entirety the man locked...