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Story The "Incomplete" (A W.I.P. progressively written mini-novel)
Your story's first sentence starts the story off rather abruptly, I'd suggest changing the sentence structure around. The mentioning of humans could use a little more "atmosphere" to it, to give maybe a disconnected feel or distance between the Halflings and the humans. The reader should be on... -
Story The Shoutbox Story: Contained Insanity
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Story It Tolls for Thee
So revolution. Much Viva. Many resistance. Such book. Very wow.