Episode 1 to a nonexistent series.
Here's the backstory to this.
I started RPing on IScribble, a wonderful ( or at least, it used to be wonderful ) site for collaborative drawing and, it turned out, RPing. Back then, there were no forums or mods: you just joined a thread...
To whom it concerns:
Part of the reason that Crocmon put this up, is at my request. As a result I feel somewhat obliged to address this issue of the argument forming. Clearly, it is starting to get heated, and I want to make sure that it doesn't get out of hand. This is most definitely...
Your poem began with the fourth line of each verse ending on a shorter line, which I liked because I feel it emphasizes those lines, which you tended to make significant which is good.
Like | you | mur | dered | that | young | boy! -- 7
What | was | he | to | you? -- 5
A | mov | ing | tar...
Didn't know you did poetry Medel :]
I like it. There are a few rhythmic oddities moving from lines to lines, where the beat kind of jumps, but otherwise it's a great start.