Search results for query: *

You still didn't actually read the rest of the story, and are harping at me based on the first paragraph. That is the entire problem here. Giving me an entire spiel about what exactly somebody else said that somehow correlates to your opinion. Your mention of Catch-22 was hilarious to me...

That first sentence was done to establish the scene, that the planet he was on was a hot desert. From there on it's describing the area. The 'blood' was to imply that death had occurred there, and not only that but the fact that - with "infected or otherwise" - there was some kind of infection...

At this point however, the dialogue is supposed to be awkward, somewhat blocky. What's happening is a guy who, due to his father's death, has zero emotion. He pretty much does the paces for the sake of doing them, getting laughs and that's it. He speaks bluntly, with a matter-of-fact kind of...

What will follow here is something I've done once or twice before. Since this community is notably more awsm, it might get read somewhat. Now, I'm not claiming to be a Bradbury or Heinlein, but what I'm about to post is some nifty Sci-Fi stuff. It gets nasty sometimes, so yea. Don't read if...