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Having the Red Demon leave instead of fighting would be a brilliant move indeed. The third chapter would then make completely clear, beyond any reasonable doubt, that he is a rounded up character, with both strengths and flaws. You are certainly right when pointing out that weaknesses do not...

This is pretty good man. You made an amazing job at showing the extremely harsh and cruel living conditions of the protagonist. The action scene was well structured and intense, and the tortured inner world of the protagonist is perfectly portrayed. Some parts made me genuinely uncomfortable...