"Wake up." A voice speaks to you. You are not sure if the voice is real or imagined, but it wakes you up just the same. You open your eyes and look up at a swirling redish mass high above you. You vauely recall it being called "sky", although it looks nothing like the image that comes to mind...
I like this story. It’s very dark, and for me it provokes the question of whether the man was actually sane. Was he, and was the coconut really alive and speaking to him, or was he just under an illusion of sanity and actually insane?