and sorry if im being excessive here, its just that my understanding of the character is concerning. even if in actuality the character, sans delivery, is fine.
okay, thats wishywashy, but i guess if you know whats going on, thats fine. just make sure you do have a firm moral compass for her, swaying from moment to moment in concepts like that is disastrous for character development.
youve totally glossed over the fact that *she* must still have an internal moral compass.
The character must have an understanding of the moral polarity of their actions. does she know that violent crime is a bad thing? or does she see it as a good thing? Does she treat ALL violent crime as...
i absolutely intend to make this work. we should have a 5th joining. and if the other two stay, i think thats a solid cast. :o
i just wonder if my intent in this roleplay is coming off as too playful.
like, im not trying to do E.T. here, im trying to do Pan's Labyrinth, yknow?
ijust.
@Yakom011001
your power is probably more Psionic Tendril Generation than Telekinesis, by definition. might wanna alter the naming.
and maybe talk about what aspects of the ability are still difficult to control/use.
the character seems solid, but it'd be nice to have a little more beef on her...
℞ What 自 Freedom 由 Means ℞
『 THE BASICS 』
⇢ Name | Eden Suzanne Eikenboom
⇢ Nickname | E., Suzy (albeit by almost nobody)
⇢ Age | 12 (and a half)
⇢ Birthday | September 1st 1992
⇢ Height | 149 cm
⇢ Hair length & color | Mid Back length, Red
⇢ Eye color | Emerald Green
⇢ Gender | Female...