Pfft she's come to watch this die, if for any reason at all.
T'is oncoming death has her mark all over.
Don't be fooled, poor Doosk, for it is she who orchestrated the end of Coffee.
Thus thy came to gloat over thy victory.
Begone, villain! Go harm some other maiden's sacred place!
This is something I wrote over 2 years ago, me trying to get over a bad break up. It's clunky and juvenile at best, but I don't want to change it since each word meant something special to me.
Thought I ought to share it somewhere, for no reason at all.
Here is as good a place as any.
Lost...
I have to be honest, it actually took me quite a while to understand most of what was being said, anywhere.
I am only vaguely familiar with some of these writing concepts you guys were mentioning, and am entirely clueless on some others. What I ultimately lack is the polishing afterward, cuz I...
Thanks for the criticism, that was the first time I've ever written a "poem"
I'm leaving and never coming back xD
The Criticism has broken me
#BrokenDreams
#JustDooskThings
I don't have a clue about the proper way to write things
Never took a writing course
I just read a lot and write for fun
Feedbacks are welcomed
So here goes
Perception
I walk through my life an outsider in mind
but a participant at heart
I philosophize my every thoughts
trying...