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I do have more recent stuff, but I definitely can't say it's any better in the areas that you mentioned. Perhaps, however, I haven't done any study on structure at all. I have often read my poetry and felt that it was stale, not quite lacking flow, but... just, with the same flow. I believe that...

Cool. I'm glad that nothing threw you off too bad. =)

Thanks, Roabie! You're very kind! =) I hope that it was easy to keep up with the rhyme scheme and all that.

I was wondering what other people would think of it, so I decided to post it here. ------- This is one of my favorites. Oddly endearing, while still being starkly depressing. ------- "The Rose," Walking slowly, with a rose, no one knows, just where it goes. Faulty mecha kill...